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Poor nations are getting poor day by day whereas the rich nations are getting richer .what can be done to reduce this distance.

Poor nations are getting poor day by day whereas the rich nations are getting richer. what can be done to reduce this distance. 1nXVn
In modern scaniro, all over the world there are several countries which of some countries are developed and few are undeveloped because the lack of rules and regulations. Many other kind of factors that effects the economic growth of nations. There are various explanations for cover this detachment which I will be discussed in ensuling fragments. Firstly, the corruption is the main cause behind the poor nations. All the money is spend by the leaders they are not distribute the ammount in necessitous. Secondly, the over-papulation also a responsible for undeveloped. For epitome, in many nations there are no rule for the public related to childens. Moreover, illiteracy is also a big factor for poor nation. Futhermore, the government should not provide jobs to educated people that's why the unemployability is more. On the other hand, the difference between poor and rich nations can be decrease. If the countries should maintain favorable relationship with each other. Futhermore, rich countries need to grant their assistance to poor nations it is the greatest way to development of poor nations. Also, seminars and camps should be organised for make people aware themselves. To conclude, poor nations can be rich if they make affable relation with developed countries. In my views, the ministry of the backward nations needs to provide jobs to poor people and unemployed youth so they can do work and grown up.
In modern
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scaniro
, all over the world there are several
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countries
which of
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some
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countries
are developed
and few
are undeveloped
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because
the lack of
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rules
and regulations.
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Many
other kind of factors that effects the economic growth of
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nations
. There are various explanations for cover this detachment which I will
be discussed
in
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ensuling
fragments.

Firstly
, the corruption is the main cause behind the
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poor
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nations
. All the money is
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spend
by the leaders they are not
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distribute
the
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ammount
in necessitous.
Secondly
, the
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over-papulation
also
a responsible for undeveloped. For epitome, in
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many
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nations
there are no
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rule
for the public related to
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childens
.
Moreover
, illiteracy is
also
a
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big
factor for
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poor
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nation
.
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Futhermore
, the
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government
should not provide jobs to educated
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people
that's why the
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unemployability
is more.

On the other hand
, the difference between
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poor
and rich
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nations
can be decrease.
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If
the
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should maintain favorable relationship with each other.
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Futhermore
, rich
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countries
need to grant their assistance to
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poor
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nations
it is the greatest way to development of
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poor
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nations
.
Also
, seminars and camps should be
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for
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make
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people
aware themselves.

To conclude
,
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poor
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nations
can be rich if they
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make
affable relation with developed
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countries
. In my views, the ministry of the backward
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nations
needs to provide jobs to
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poor
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people
and unemployed youth
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so
they can do work and grown up.
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IELTS essay Poor nations are getting poor day by day whereas the rich nations are getting richer. what can be done to reduce this distance.

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