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Give your opinion about Changing Global prevent who individuals or government, big companies

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On these days global climate change is a serious problem all over the world. So there are many causes. This problem is belong to each individuals and companies or government. From my view I am strongly convinced that imdividual play an important role in protecting environment and prevent climate change because of some following reasons. Firstly, this Global problem has different ways for reasons. In this changing climate causes are burnings leaves by many people and using to lot of own car cutting down plants. If every person uses less upper causes they will add their portion for this reasons. Another reason to support my opinion that is governments and large companies will be ineffectual for changing climate if citizens support with their help. For example, when government enact new laws and policies on prohibiting illegal deforestation to protect environment. It leads to that residents are not willing to do beneficial work in order to prevent climate change. Eventually risk of these government policies get failure is actually clear. To sum up, in my view people should protect our motherland and government must do something to keep environment.
On these days global
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climate
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change
is a serious problem all over the world.
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there are
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causes. This problem is
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belong
to each
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individuals
and
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companies
or
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government
. From my view I am
strongly
convinced that
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imdividual
play an
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important
role in protecting environment and
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prevent
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climate
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change
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because
of
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following reasons.

Firstly
, this Global problem has
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different
ways for reasons. In this changing
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climate
causes are
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burnings
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leaves
by
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many
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people
and using to
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lot of
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own
car cutting down plants. If every person
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uses
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less upper
causes they will
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add
their portion for
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reasons.

Another reason to support my opinion
that is
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governments
and large
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companies
will be ineffectual for changing
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climate
if citizens support with their
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help
.
For example
, when
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government
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enact
new laws and policies on prohibiting illegal deforestation to protect environment. It leads to that residents are not willing to do beneficial work in order to
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prevent
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climate
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change
.
Eventually
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risk
of these
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government
policies
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get
failure is actually
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clear
.

To sum up, in my view
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people
should protect our motherland and
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government
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must
do something to
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keep
environment.

IELTS essay Give your opinion about Changing Global prevent who individuals or government, big companies

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
188 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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