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pollution is always a hot potato because plastic bags are wasted here and thereafter one-time use.

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Nowadays, pollution is always a hot potato because plastic bags are wasted here and thereafter one-time use. I will give an account of the results of natural resources and people's health. First and foremost, one of the major issues related to this is that marine life would be destroyed. Because marine animals could classify the difference between their food and plastic bags, it would lead these species on the verge of extinction Moreover, another serious problem is that people would suffer from some diseases. Since discarded items could be thrown away to rivers and if people did not know about this, they could use water for daily basic like watering In conclusion, this phenomenon contributes to do harm to both humans and natural resources for the two reasons mentioned above.
Nowadays, pollution is always a hot potato
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because
plastic bags
are wasted
here and thereafter one-time
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use
. I will give an account of the results of natural resources and
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people
's health.

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and foremost, one of the major issues related to this is that marine life would be
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destroyed
.
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Because
marine animals could classify the difference between their food and plastic bags, it would lead these species on the verge of
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extinction


Moreover
, another serious problem is that
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people
would suffer from
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some
diseases. Since discarded items could
be thrown
away to rivers and if
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people
did not know about this, they could
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use
water for daily basic like
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watering


In conclusion
, this phenomenon contributes to do harm to both humans and natural resources for the two reasons mentioned above.
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IELTS essay pollution is always a hot potato because plastic bags are wasted here and thereafter one-time use.

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  American English
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130 words
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