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Describe a successful organization that you know about you should say.

Describe a successful organization that you know about you should say. NV71m
Hear I would like to talk about one popular medicine and surgical instrument making company. It's started 1997. so that it was very old and famous company which is located in the main city area. nowadays many people suffer from various types of disease so that they need a good quality and low cost medicine so that things they always keep it their mind and make a effective medicine for the people. also making a surgical instrument which is use for the patient surgery time. That company is located in main city area so many people doing job easily. I am also doing a job their last seven year. I know about that company through my best friend. mostly people use product of this company. and organization of that company is well manner their is no any issue about medicine and surgical instruments.
Hear I would like to talk about one popular
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making a surgical instrument which is
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company
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organization of that
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IELTS essay Describe a successful organization that you know about you should say.

Essay
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1 paragraphs
143 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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