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An important year in my life

An important year in my life MogDL
Last year was an important year because there were many changes in my life. I got admission to the university and I was happy when my father bought a new motorcycle for me. But sadly I unable to celebrated Eid Mubarak with others because coronavirus pandemic. So in the past year I have changed a lot to lived as a new normal life. Last year was an important year because there were many changes in my life. I got admission to the university and I was happy when my father bought a new motorcycle for me. But sadly I unable to celebrated Eid Mubarak with others because coronavirus pandemic. So in the past year I have changed a lot to lived as a new normal life.
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bought
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IELTS essay An important year in my life

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
126 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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