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Pollution and other environmental damage are inevitable results when a country is developing and growing its wealth To what extent you agree or disagree v.2

Pollution and other environmental damage are inevitable results when a country is developing and growing its wealth 2
By the dawn of the 20th century, the industrial revolution & its multinational industrial companies trailed the developed countries into a new era of wealth & civilization, yet, I do believe that its reckless, inconsiderate & even greedy industry-related polluting activities are putting the whole world into danger & even the whole mankind into distinction, & in this essay I will discuss & explain this. Some of the " Pro-industrialization" dispute the fact that the outburst of industrial activities
By the dawn of the 20th century, the industrial revolution
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; its multinational industrial
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companies
trailed the
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developed countries
into a new era of wealth
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&amp
; civilization,
yet
, I do believe that its reckless, inconsiderate
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&amp
; even greedy industry-related polluting activities are putting the whole world into
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danger
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&amp
; even the whole mankind into distinction,
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&amp
; in this essay I will discuss
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&amp
;
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explain
this.

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Some of the
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IELTS essay Pollution and other environmental damage are inevitable results when a country is developing and growing its wealth 2

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
78 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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