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pollution and damage to the environment

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In my opinion, solution problems will never be solved. It’s one of the biggest world problems, which, unfortunately would follow our planet for all time of its existence. It’s hard to believe, but it’s true. First, it’s ours relation to the planet. We can’t appriciate what nature gives to us: food, place to live, clothes. Can you count how much per day you do bad for planet. Maybe you’re don’t ever think about it when you buy plastic boxes in shop. Or for example when you drive your transport everyday, because it’s really do bad to the environment. Also, one of the biggest disasters too is polution of rivers and seas. I don’t understand what comes on human’s mind when they leave rubbish at water of course, I don’t think they do it on porpuse. Anyway, we can try to lose procent of losts every day. We can use less plastic and fuel. Everything is in our hands, let’s try to change it.
In my opinion, solution problems will never
be solved
. It’s one of the biggest world problems, which, unfortunately would follow our planet for all time of its existence. It’s
hard
to believe,
but
it’s true.

First
, it’s ours relation to the planet. We can’t
appriciate
what nature gives to us: food, place to
live
, clothes. Can you count how much per day you do
bad
for planet. Maybe you’re don’t ever
think
about it when you
buy
plastic boxes in shop. Or
for example
when you drive your transport
everyday
,
because
it’s
really
do
bad
to the environment.

Also
, one of the biggest disasters too is
polution
of rivers and seas. I don’t understand what
comes
on human’s mind when they
leave
rubbish at water
of course
, I don’t
think
they do it on
porpuse
. Anyway, we can try to lose
procent
of
losts
every day. We can
use
less plastic and fuel. Everything is in our hands,
let
’s try to
change
it.
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IELTS essay pollution and damage to the environment

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
163 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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