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Politicians against scientists. Some people believe that politicians have the greatest impact, while others believe that scientists make the greatest contribution to the world. Give your opinion.

Politicians against scientists. Some people believe that politicians have the greatest impact, while others believe that scientists make the greatest contribution to the world. Give your opinion. 0AEe3
Some people are of the opinion that politicians have the greatest influence on the development of the world, while others, like me, believe that scientists make the greatest contribution. Therefore, one can cite such reasons as the creation of many scientific factors as well as the high development of technologies. Today we all know that now science is developing every day and there are many peaks where you can strive. According to a popular proverb, a scientist leads, an unlearned man follows him. Relying on this proverb, we can say that politicians depend on scientists. Of course, politicians rule the country and the law, and are conducting important negotiations. But if there had been no scientists at this time, the world would not have developed, for there would have been no one to open global news. The 21st century is the age of technology. Technology is evolving every day. At the moment, we can see that with the help of scientists, it has become much easier for people to live and develop. For example, those kind of vaccines developed by scientists saved many lives, cars and planes that help move from one place to another. All this thanks to scientists. To summarize, as they say, the scientist is venerable everywhere. That is, we should support scientists in everything so that the world develops further.
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are of the opinion that politicians have the greatest influence on the development of the world, while others, like me, believe that
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scientists
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the greatest contribution.
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many
scientific factors
as well
as the high development of technologies.

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Today
we all know that
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now
science is developing every day and there are
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many
peaks where you can strive. According to a popular proverb, a
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scientist
leads, an unlearned
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man
follows him. Relying on this proverb, we can say that politicians depend on
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scientists
.
Of course
, politicians
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rule
the country and the law, and are conducting
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important
negotiations.
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But
if there had been no
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scientists
at this time, the world would not have developed, for there would have been no one to open global news.

The 21st century is the age of technology. Technology is evolving every day. At the moment, we can
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see
that with the
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help
of
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scientists
, it has become much easier for
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people
to
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live
and develop.
For example
,
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those kind
of vaccines developed by
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scientists
saved
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many
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lives
, cars and
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planes
that
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help
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move
from one place to another. All this thanks to scientists.

To summarize
, as they say, the
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scientist
is venerable everywhere.
That is
, we should support
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scientists
in everything
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so
that the world develops
further
.
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IELTS essay Politicians against scientists. Some people believe that politicians have the greatest impact, while others believe that scientists make the greatest contribution to the world. Give your opinion.

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