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Please write in no more than 200 words why you would like to take online British Council professional development course.

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I am Saidova Gulmira. I am an English teacher of secondary school in Hazorasp district. I really love my job. Why I want to participate in this course because I want to learn more knowledge, experience which more I have. I always desire to improve my reading, writing, speaking and teaching skills. It is pretty good opportunity for me to increase my knowledge. Moreover in this program we can share our practical knowledge with other teachers and in the same time we also acquire a knowledge of theirs. I always keen on learning other teachers way of teaching, especially when native speakers teaching methods. The reasons which I mentioned above I totally want to member of this program.

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