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Drugs should be legalized

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Drugs represent an extremely dangerous thing. They have caused many deaths. Some drugs are very useful in medicine and in curing some dreadful deceases. Drugs should never be legalized because of several reasons. Firstly, as I've said drugs are opiums that cause unnatural behavior in people. Some drugs are light, while others are deadly right away. Many deaths around the world occur because of them. Most drugs aren't allowed in the world because of the dangerous consequences they produce. Side effects are terrifying. In addition, there is a lot of crime happening due drug use. Many addicts steal just so they can do drugs.
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consequences they produce. Side effects are terrifying.
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IELTS essay Drugs should be legalized

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
104 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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