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Please list any schoolarship or awards that you have received

Please list any schoolarship or awards that you have received Xo3n8

Winning a prize is always exciting and the winners are adored(considered) as the most respectable people in society, but not everyone can win the awards and it requires special sort of skills in my opinion. I have received numerous awards since my childhood. Firstly, my parents have always given me a prize when I get excellent grades at school. As a result I greatly inspired by prize and my confidence also boosted in addition I study harder to justify their trust. Secondly from my academic career I won the important prize for my family participating in math competition at school. When I participated in the competition I, in fact did not think about the results but I tried to do my best and I did so, and the results backed me, consequently they gave me not only certificate but also money which was necessary to buy for my mother some medical condition. Thirdly, I recieve the performance award in the IELTS exam. This is one of the most prestigious award in my university so it made me honoured because working and studying simultaneously and get an award really inspiring. Therefore my experience such as kids and speaking clubs also weekly trip to historical sites in Uzbekistan was very useful for getting this award. In conclusion, winning prize is really enjoying and I hope that I will get the top awards in my future life to be respectful among society and being example for others in my country.

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prize
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people
 in society, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not everyone can win the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrophygoldgiftgrantpresentationdecision
awards
 and it requires special sort of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 in my opinion. I have received numerous You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrophygoldgiftgrantpresentationdecision
awards
 since my childhood.

Firstly
, my parents have always This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
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prize
 when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 excellent grades at school. As a result
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prize
 and my confidence also
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 from my academic career I won the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
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prize
 for my family participating in math competition at school. When I participated in the competition I, in fact did not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 about the results This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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so
, and the results backed me, consequently
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only
 certificate This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
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buy
 for my mother This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 medical condition. Thirdly
, I Possible spelling mistake found.receiverelieve
recieve
 the performance You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrophygoldgiftgrantpresentationdecision
award
 in the IELTS exam. This is one of the most prestigious You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrophygoldgiftgrantpresentationdecision
award
 in my university This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 it made me Possible spelling mistake. 'honoured' is British English.honored
honoured
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrophygoldgiftgrantpresentationdecision
award
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Therefore
 my experience such as kids and speaking clubs also
 weekly trip to historical sites in Uzbekistan was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 useful for getting this award.

In conclusion
, winning You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtopnotchoutstanding
prize
 is really
 enjoying and I hope that I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the top You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrophygoldgiftgrantpresentationdecision
awards
 in my future life to be respectful among society and being example for others in my country. 