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Playing football is good thing.do you agree?

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There is a current upsurge in the demand for petroleum products. it has been suggested that unexplored regions of the earth should be mined for crude oil so to increase the level of mineral available for public use but this I disagree with because the use of fossil fuel causes environmental pollutions as well as, destabilizes the world ecosystem. To begin with, most modern engines are powered by petrol which produces some harmful gases called greenhouse gas such as; Methane, Co2 and Sulphur dioxide. unfortunately, this gases trap heat from the sun rays therefore making the atmosphere warmer, in a phenomenon called global warming. This is one of the major challenges faced by human race although measures are being taken to control the damages however, this is not enough and the world continues to suffer. Melting of the polar ice, for example, have caused increased in water level hense seashore communities are homeless. Additionally, if natural surviving areas of the globe is tempered with, this would lead to further loss of the remaining ecosystem because it would increase the number of endangered species. Moreover, more roads will be created to access this remote areas thus forcing animals out of their habitat and unfortunately, most of them might not survive alone. this is the basic reason for extinction but it is quite unfortunate that every effort made to clone the extinct breeds has proved to be counter-productive so it is obvious that we are facing the ripple effect of our action already, why create more problem? the poor quality of soil seen all over the globe for instance is evidence of a limited number of earthworm in the soil since most of them have been destroyed by bush burning. In conclusion, I strongly disagree with the notion that more areas should be opened in other to tap more resources due to the negative effects such as; pollutions and destroying natural colonies of species which is feared that it would one day make the world inhabitable for the human race, rather an alternative source of energy

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 has been suggested
 that unexplored regions of the earth should be mined
 for crude oil This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 to increase the level of mineral available for public This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
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but
 this I disagree with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of fossil fuel causes environmental pollutions as well
 as, destabilizes the world ecosystem.

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begin
 with, most modern engines are powered
 by petrol which produces This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 harmful gases called greenhouse gas such as; Methane, Co2 and Possible spelling mistake. 'Sulphur' is British English.Sulfur
Sulphur
 dioxide. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterUnfortunately
unfortunately
, this gases trap heat from the sun rays therefore
 making the atmosphere warmer, in a phenomenon called global warming. This is one of the major challenges faced by human race although measures are being taken
 to control the damages however
, this is not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 and the world continues to suffer. Melting of the polar ice, for example
, have caused increased in water level Possible spelling mistake found.hencesensedensetenseHessehens
hense
 seashore communities are homeless.

Additionally
, if natural surviving areas of the globe is tempered
 with, this would lead to further
 loss of the remaining ecosystem This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it would increase the number of endangered species. Moreover
, more roads will be created
 to access this remote areas thus
 forcing animals out of their habitat and unfortunately, most of them might not survive alone. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThis
this
 is the basic reason for extinction This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it is quite unfortunate that every effort made to clone the extinct breeds has proved to be counter-productive This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 it is obvious that we are facing the ripple effect of our action already, why create more problem? This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
 poor quality of soil This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 all over the globe for instance
 is evidence of a limited number of earthworm in the soil since most of them have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishedruined
destroyed
 by bush burning.

In conclusion
, I strongly
 disagree with the notion that more areas should be opened
 in other to tap more resources due to the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 effects such as; pollutions and destroying natural colonies of species which is feared
 that it would one day This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the world inhabitable for the human race, rather
 an alternative source of energy