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You and your friends talk about future career options. One of your friends plans to study abroad, because he hopes to be better prepared for the global market. As an entry requirement for a college he has to hand in an argumentative essay about the importance of globalization and you decide to help him collecting information. In his opinion not only international companies but also local firms and even he as an individual are clearly affected by globalization.
You and your friends talk about future career options. One of your friends plans to study abroad,
because
he hopes to be better prepared for the global market. As an entry requirement for a college he
has to
hand in an argumentative essay about the importance of globalization and you decide to
help
him
collecting
information. In his opinion not
only
international
companies
but
also
local firms and even he as an individual are
clearly
affected
by globalization.
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IELTS essay introduction to situation

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
78 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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