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Play video game and Go to Sleep

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I need put my phone and go to sleep but i can't. I want play video games but my battery have 44% so i can't play a game this so sad and i always sleep on 12: 00 p. m. I feel i very bad english if i don't learn english today, tomorow i think i could be stupid english. And go to sleep? No i say lie. Why my text is short how can i write long and you can give me scoccer. I want my text too long but i can't think anything, my brain of me now it so hole. Please give me
I need put my phone and go to sleep
but
i
can't. I want play video games
but
my battery have 44%
so
i
can't play a game this
so
sad and
i
always sleep
on
12: 00 p. m.
I
feel i
very
bad
english
if
i
don't learn
english
today
,
tomorow
i
think
i
could be stupid
english
. And go to sleep? No
i
say lie. Why my text is short how can
i
write long and you can give me
scoccer
. I want my text too long
but
i
can't
think
anything, my brain of me
now
it
so
hole.
Please
give
me
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IELTS essay Play video game and Go to Sleep

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
105 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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