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Nowadays, online shopping becomes more popular than in-store shopping. Do the advantages of online shopping outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, online shopping becomes more popular than in-store shopping. Do the advantages of online shopping outweigh the disadvantages? GLJ2e

It is certainly true that most of the people in these days tend to prefer online format over the traditional way to go shopping. It is my belief that the positive effects of this phenomenon could certainly offset its disadvantages. There are several drawbacks of cybershopping. A common criticism of this method is that the goods individuals have purchased could possibly not look similar to how they assume it to be. Besides, there is a chance that consumers might be receiving faulty merchandise. This is because it is impossible for customers to go through on the product until they have received it. Another negative aspect can be that the process of in-store shopping can be done in a short period of time, whereas the virtual way will require a longer duration due to the shipment process along with the distance

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