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bad advertising resulting in misinformation

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Some advertising institutions try to convey misinformation about the products to establish their brand awareness, which has been criticized strictly. It is true that the advertisement campaigns intentionally mislead consumers about dubious products that make them feel cheated. For instance, KOLs sometimes are highly paid to share their great product experiences despite the fact that they are low-quality ones containing harmful ingredients for health such as plumbum in a lipstick. As a result, customers suffer unpredictable outcomes because of their beliefs. Therefore, it is urgent to remove these kinds of ads to build a clearer market.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 advertising institutions try to convey misinformation about the products to establish their brand awareness, which has been criticized
strictly
. It is true that the advertisement campaigns intentionally
 mislead consumers about dubious products that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 them feel cheated. For instance
, Possible spelling mistake found.VolsKolaSolsColsPolsKOS
KOLs
The adverb 'sometimes' usually goes after the verb 'are'.are sometimes
sometimes are
highly
 paid to share their great product experiences despite the fact that they are low-quality ones containing harmful ingredients for health such as Possible spelling mistake found.plum bumplumb um
plumbum
 in a lipstick. As a result
, customers suffer unpredictable outcomes This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of their beliefs. Therefore
, it is urgent to remove these kinds of ads to build a clearer market. 