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plants can provide food, shelter, clothing, medicine. what is one kind of plant that is important to you are the people in your country v.1

plants can provide food, shelter, clothing, medicine. what is one kind of plant that is important to you are the people in your country v. 1
Plants play a vital role in our lives. They provide us a number of things that we use in our daily routine. We cannot live without oxygen that is produced by plants. In this world all countries have their specific plants that complete their daily lives's requirement. In my country, India, a number of plants are available that are important in the aspects of the meal, medicine or many more. Coconut trees are one of them. Every single person in India uses things made from coconut tree on a daily basis. Firstly, the traditional Indian food is widely appreciated for its fabulous taste. Most of the Indian food contains coconut, that gives a great aroma and wonderful taste to food. For example, in my house we use three to four coconuts daily, we cannot imagine curries without coconut. Adding to this, coconut is also famous for its nutritional and health values. Most of the herbal skin care product contains coconut as an important ingredient because everyone wants to look good with flawless skin so in this case coconut complete their desire. Moreover, coconut oil is cholesterol free and contains no trans fat. Furthermore, coconut milk can replace regular milk or soya milk because sometimes babies have allergy from regular and soya milk but coconut milk is very good for babies. Similarly, coconut products are adding revenue to the country. Because products made from every part of the coconut tree like shell, trunk and leaves. In the museums there are many sculptures that are made with coconut tree that represents our country. In conclusion, no doubt India has a different kind of plants that have lots of importance, but in my opinion, the coconut tree is more important as compared to other plants because it's every parts have some kind of benefits and nobody in India would live a single day without it.
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Plants
play a vital role in our
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lives
. They provide us a number of things that we
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use
in our
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daily
routine. We cannot
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live
without oxygen that
is produced
by
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plants
. In this world all countries have their specific
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plants
that complete their
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daily
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lives's
requirement. In my country, India, a number of
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plants
are available that are
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important
in the aspects of the meal, medicine or
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many
more. Coconut
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trees
are one of them. Every single person in India
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uses
things made from coconut
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tree
on a
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daily
basis.

Firstly
, the traditional Indian food is
widely
appreciated for its fabulous taste. Most of the Indian food contains coconut, that gives a great aroma and wonderful taste to food.
For example
, in my
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house
we
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use
three to four coconuts
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daily
, we cannot imagine curries without coconut. Adding to this, coconut is
also
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famous
for its nutritional and health values. Most of the herbal skin care product contains coconut as an
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important
ingredient
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because
everyone wants to look
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good
with flawless skin
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so
in this case
coconut complete their desire.

Moreover
, coconut oil is cholesterol free and contains no trans
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fat
.
Furthermore
, coconut
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milk
can replace regular
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milk
or
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soya
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milk
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because
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sometimes
babies have allergy from regular and
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soya
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milk
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but
coconut
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milk
is
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very
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good
for babies.
Similarly
, coconut products are adding revenue to the country.
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Because
products made from every part of the coconut
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tree
like shell, trunk and
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leaves
. In the museums there are
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many
sculptures that
are made
with coconut
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tree
that represents our country.

In conclusion
, no doubt India has a
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different
kind of
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plants
that have lots of importance,
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but
in my opinion, the coconut
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tree
is more
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important
as compared to other
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plants
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because
it's every
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parts
have
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some
kind of benefits and nobody in India would
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live
a single day without it.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS essay plants can provide food, shelter, clothing, medicine. what is one kind of plant that is important to you are the people in your country v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
312 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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