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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. v.9

Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. v. 9
Nowadays, personal computer starts to be an every-day-life tool for resolving bunch of issues. It is coming into the education sphere too, so there is debate about positive and negative remedies of computers in education never stops. On the one hand, you will always remember essential things of every subject you have learned, says elderly people who take their graduation without high technology gadgets. For sure, you can make presentations without a computer and projector, but it would be barely seen though. And even more, you can find needed information on the internet. And it's obviously true, but you will spend much more time to do that in spite of using world wide web. In spite of that, progressive people who do not mind to use everything that time can offer. A laptop can be the best thing for learning things rapidly. Student and save lots of data and do not spend time to finding and remembering all the information he or she had been reading. It is always easier to share information among students or tutor just using email or university network. What is more, the computer does mathematical operations faster in spite of human, and it makes life of the scientists easier. To put it all in the shell, every new step of technology makes our life casual and easy to go, but it takes us a privilege to decide what to learn and what to do. A laptop starts to be our best thing to learn, play, talk and hang out with friends.
Nowadays, personal computer
starts
to be an every-day-life tool for resolving
bunch of
issues. It is coming into the education sphere too,
so
there is debate about
positive
and
negative
remedies of computers in education never
stops
.

On the one hand, you will always remember essential things of every subject you have learned, says elderly
people
who take their graduation without high technology gadgets. For sure, you can
make
presentations without a computer and projector,
but
it would be
barely
seen
though. And even more, you can find needed information on the internet. And it's
obviously
true,
but
you will spend much more time to do that
in spite of
using
world wide web
.

In spite of
that, progressive
people
who do not mind to
use
everything that time can offer. A laptop can be the best thing for learning things
rapidly
. Student and save lots of data and do not spend time to finding and remembering all the information he or she had been reading. It is always easier to share information among students or tutor
just
using email or university network.
What is more
, the computer does mathematical operations faster
in spite of
human, and it
makes
life of the scientists easier.

To put it all in the shell, every new step of technology
makes
our life casual and easy to go,
but
it takes us a privilege to decide what to learn and what to do. A laptop
starts
to be our best thing to learn, play, talk and hang out with friends.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. v. 9

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
256 words
6
Overall Band Score
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