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Plan and write an advert for your club.

Plan and write an advert for your club. pepQw
It is not simple for anyone who has ever created a strategy that is nearly 50 pages long and brought people to their side. I am here to outline the strategy and introduce the club "PH" (Peace reigns in your heart). Peace, as Miss Grand International 2021 Nguyen Thuc Thuy Tien once said, is like the air that we breathe. We experience it every day, but we don't always consider it our obligation to maintain it. We must take a position in the struggle for love and peace. My PH Club teaches you to be self-reliant and to have a fighting spirit within you. My peace is the calm tranquility that emanates from your heart. Keeping the peace does not just entail battling foreign invaders as it did in the past, but it also entails fighting within ourselves, in the attitudes and sentiments of individuals toward one another. Engage in online activities to boost morale and awareness through interactions. Your body struggle training, in conjunction with the PH Club, helps you express your feelings and attitudes, determining the percentage that must be used in that example or situation to improve yourself every day. Do you find yourself in conflict? I simply can not understand it. Do you have no idea what you're thinking or doing? Everything will change when you come to the PH Club. Put your heart into me, and I will help you perfect it. It won't be as easy, but nothing is impossible if you trust PH. Peace should always be in our hearts, and it will be in yours as well. A trustworthy team of professionals with many years of expertise, as well as actual individuals and real stories from their successful steps. The PH Club will make you realize that your feelings for us are correct; having lived in the world without ever knowing the PH Club will make you regret it for the rest of your life. Many good events will not disappoint you. Register today to receive unique offers: http: //www. PH. vn/DangKyThamGia/PTTM. Keep in mind that peace prevails in your heart; seek to improve it every day.
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Tien once
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take a position in the struggle for
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love
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. My PH
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Club
teaches you to be self-reliant and to have a fighting spirit within you. My
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peace
is the calm tranquility that emanates from your
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heart
. Keeping the
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peace
does not
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entail battling foreign invaders as it did in the past,
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Club
,
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helps
you express your feelings and attitudes, determining the percentage that
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be
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used
in that example or situation to
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yourself every day. Do you find yourself in conflict? I
simply
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idea
what you're thinking or doing? Everything will
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come
to the PH
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Club
. Put your
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heart
into me, and I will
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help
you perfect it. It won't be as easy,
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but
nothing is impossible if you trust PH.
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Peace
should always be in our
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hearts
, and it will be in yours
as well
. A trustworthy team of professionals with
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many
years of expertise,
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make
you regret it for the rest of your life.
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Many
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good
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will not disappoint you. Register
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today
to receive unique offers:
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improve
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IELTS essay Plan and write an advert for your club.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
355 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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