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Plan A & B shows a health centre in 2005 and in present day

Plan A & B shows a health centre in 2005 and in present day NoQm

The blueprints A and B depict the architectural changes done on a health center in two years, in 2005 and on the present day. It can be said that the layout has been changed keeping in mind an increase in the number of visitors and patients. The noticeable differences between both the plans is the change in layout, positioning of rooms and additions to the existing design. Comparing both the blueprints, we can see that the layout of the center was rectangular, with a long hallway leading to the rooms and the reception desk towards the end. However, in the present day, the layout is almost circular, with the rooms circling the walls of the center. Even the reception desk is at the front, just inside a repositioned entryway at the left corner. Another distinct difference between the two layouts is how the sizes of the pre-existing rooms from 2005 had been reduced. Howbeit, these changes have led to the addition of another consultation room as well as a play area for children, which is opposite to the reception desk. A major addition to the health center in the present day blueprint is the Minor Operations Room, which is constructed adjoining the unchanged Physiotherapy Room towards the back of the center. Although the garden space has reduced, but it has paved way for a bigger parking area, an increase from 12 to 30 spaces.

The blueprints A and B depict the architectural This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
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 that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblueprintmapdesignchartgeography
layout
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changed
 keeping in mind an increase in the number of visitors and patients.

The noticeable differences between both the plans is the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
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layout
, positioning of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
rooms
 and additions to the existing design.

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see
 that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblueprintmapdesignchartgeography
layout
 of the center was rectangular, with a long hallway leading to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
rooms
 and the reception desk towards the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
. However
, in the present day, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblueprintmapdesignchartgeography
layout
 is almost circular, with the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
rooms
 circling the walls of the center. Even the reception desk is at the front, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 inside a repositioned entryway at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 corner.

Another distinct difference between the two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withblueprintmapdesignchartgeography
layouts
 is how the sizes of the pre-existing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
rooms
 from 2005 had been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
. Howbeit, these This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 have led to the addition of another consultation You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
as well
 as a play area for children, which is opposite to the reception desk.

A major addition to the health center in the present day blueprint is the Minor Operations You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
Room
, which is constructed
 adjoining the unchanged Physiotherapy You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
Room
 towards the back of the center. Although the garden space has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it has paved way for a bigger parking area, an increase from 12 to 30 spaces. 