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place that holds memory: Kathmandu qhidaidjaosuq0si0si0 ajdhdiahdiahdiahis

place that holds memory: Kathmandu qhidaidjaosuq0si0si0 ajdhdiahdiahdiahis 8dkLr
Kathmandu: my birth place, my hometown and my life. A place which just cannot be described in mere words, one must actually come here to see its beauty. It is the capital city of Nepal situated in a beautiful valley in the central region of the country. City rich in cultre, ethnicity, harmony. people of various religions living under a same roof with nothing but love for others in their heart. city of innumeral temples and a major attraction for tpurist from all acoss the globe. As a child, I lived in swoyambhu which made me love the place more. I have always loved the crowd, the glittering lights, the busyness and everything else of my hometown. Growing up in Kathmandu was an awesome experience and living in a hostel with my friends added to the fun. The beauty, the greenary everything is just beyond anyones imagination.
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, ethnicity, harmony.
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the crowd,
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lights, the busyness and everything else of my hometown. Growing up in Kathmandu was an
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IELTS essay place that holds memory: Kathmandu qhidaidjaosuq0si0si0 ajdhdiahdiahdiahis

Essay
  American English
9 paragraphs
147 words
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