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place that holds memory: Kathmandu qhidaidjaosuq0si0si0 ajdhdiahdiahdiahis

place that holds memory: Kathmandu qhidaidjaosuq0si0si0 ajdhdiahdiahdiahis 8dkLr
Kathmandu: my birth place, my hometown and my life. A place which just cannot be described in mere words, one must actually come here to see its beauty. It is the capital city of Nepal situated in a beautiful valley in the central region of the country. City rich in cultre, ethnicity, harmony. people of various religions living under a same roof with nothing but love for others in their heart. city of innumeral temples and a major attraction for tpurist from all acoss the globe. As a child, I lived in swoyambhu which made me love the place more. I have always loved the crowd, the glittering lights, the busyness and everything else of my hometown. Growing up in Kathmandu was an awesome experience and living in a hostel with my friends added to the fun. The beauty, the greenary everything is just beyond anyones imagination.
Kathmandu: my birth place, my hometown and my life. A place which
just
cannot be
described
in mere words,

one
must
actually
come
here to
see
its beauty. It is the capital city of Nepal situated in a
beautiful
valley


in
the central region of the country.

City rich in
cultre
, ethnicity, harmony.
people
of various religions living under a same roof with nothing
but


love
for others in their heart.
city
of
innumeral
temples and a major attraction for
tpurist
from all
acoss
the globe.

As a child, I
lived
in
swoyambhu
which made me
love
the place more. I have always
loved
the crowd,
the


glittering
lights, the busyness and everything else of my hometown. Growing up in Kathmandu was an
awesome


experience
and living in a hostel with my friends
added
to the fun. The beauty, the
greenary
everything is
just


beyond
anyones
imagination.
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IELTS essay place that holds memory: Kathmandu qhidaidjaosuq0si0si0 ajdhdiahdiahdiahis

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147 words
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