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One of your favourite singers/ groups has just released a new song and had an impressive performance at the Year-end Music Festival . Write a review of the song and this performance, and comment on how successful the song and performance have been.

One of your favourite singers/ groups has just released a new song and had an impressive performance at the Year-end Music Festival. Write a review of the song and this performance, and comment on how successful the song and performance have been. 2RMRo
Currently, the songs which convey the message are no strangers to listeners around the world. Have you ever listened to an inspirational song dedicated to disabled people? The “Brilliant” of Taylor Swift is an ideal song for those who love positive energy. “Brilliant”, a new song has just been released in Taylor Swift's "Life" album, won a resounding award at the Year-End Music Festival. “Brilliant” implies that even if you are unusual, it still shines in your own way. Specifically, this song tells the story of a disabled girl struggling with the self-deprecation of her body defects who became a popular singer. At the beginning of the song, the gentle melody echoes through the lyrics as her narrative about feelings of inferiority, attempts to commit suicide. That makes the audience obviously feel the pain which she has experienced. Nevertheless, in the chorus, with the orchestra’s support, the music is played adagio with particularly slight dynamic change. Taylor was immersed in this song with her beautiful voice, it seems that she is the girl in the story, strongly overcoming everything to do great things. The whole stage is surrounded by bright lights, and cheers from the audience. The performance not only showed Taylor Swift’s stage presence but also enabled the audience to perceive a profound message from lyrics. Concurrently, Taylor has succeeded in expressing the character's inner mood through penetrating words that are effectively used. “Brilliant” is inspired by the life of a disabled girl who is trying to get rid of the constraints of her body to do what she wants. It is an encouragement as well as an appeal for everyone to support the spirit of perseverance and overcoming difficulties of the disabled in society. Taylor also wants to help people be aware of the meanings and empathy in life. In particular, the special thing that made the performance truly worthy was the appearance of a woman using hand signs who stands for the deaf. Taylor wants to illustrate that deaf people have the right to enjoy music as the disabled have the same rights as everyone else. After all, Taylor Swift’s “Brilliant” has successfully captured the hearts of almost all listeners and chanted humanity's groundbreaking spirit.
Currently
, the songs which convey the message are no strangers to listeners around the world. Have you ever listened to an inspirational song dedicated to
disabled
people
? The
“Brilliant”
of Taylor Swift is an ideal song for those
who
love
positive
energy.

“Brilliant”, a new song has
just
been released
in Taylor Swift's
"
Life
"
album, won a resounding award at the Year-
End
Music Festival.
“Brilliant”
implies that even if you are unusual, it
still
shines in your
own
way.
Specifically
, this song
tells
the story of a
disabled
girl struggling with the self-deprecation of her body defects
who
became a popular singer. At the beginning of the song, the gentle melody echoes through the lyrics as her narrative about feelings of inferiority, attempts to commit suicide. That
makes
the audience
obviously
feel the pain which she has experienced.
Nevertheless
, in the chorus, with the orchestra’s support, the music
is played
adagio with
particularly
slight dynamic
change
. Taylor
was immersed
in this song with her
beautiful
voice, it seems that she is the girl in the story,
strongly
overcoming everything to do great things. The whole stage
is surrounded
by bright lights, and cheers from the audience.

The performance not
only
showed
Taylor Swift’s stage presence
but
also
enabled the audience to perceive a profound message from lyrics.
Concurrently
, Taylor has succeeded in expressing the character's inner mood through penetrating words that are
effectively
used
.
“Brilliant”
is inspired
by the life of a
disabled
girl
who
is trying to
get
rid of the constraints of her body to do what she wants. It is an encouragement
as well
as an appeal for everyone to support the spirit of perseverance and overcoming difficulties of the
disabled
in society. Taylor
also
wants to
help
people
be aware of the meanings and empathy in life.
In particular
, the special thing that made the performance
truly
worthy was the appearance of a woman using hand signs
who
stands for the deaf. Taylor wants to illustrate that deaf
people
have the right to enjoy music as the
disabled
have the same rights as everyone else.

After all
, Taylor Swift’s
“Brilliant”
has
successfully
captured the hearts of almost all listeners and chanted humanity's groundbreaking spirit.
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IELTS essay One of your favourite singers/ groups has just released a new song and had an impressive performance at the Year-end Music Festival. Write a review of the song and this performance, and comment on how successful the song and performance have been.

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4 paragraphs
368 words
6.0
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