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The illustration demonstrates how plants produce energy from sunlight. Overall, photosynthesis is a natural cyclical process that allows plants to create a type of sugar as food and store them in the roots. There are five main stages to this process. To begin with, Chlorophyll is a process that absorbs sunlight and in turn, makes plants look green. Initially, the sun sends light energy that is absorbed along with carbon dioxide by the leaf. At the same time, water is sucked up by the roots and carried to the other parts of the plant through the stomata. Carbon dioxide, water, and Sunlight mix in the leaf to create a type of sugar. Oxygen and vapor are then released through the stomata which causes water loss in the leaves and this process is called Transpiration. Finally, Excessive sugar which is produced is preserved as starch in the roots of the plant.
The illustration demonstrates how
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plants
produce energy from sunlight.

Overall
, photosynthesis is a natural cyclical process that
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allows
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plants
to create a type of sugar as food and store them in the roots. There are five main stages to this process.

To
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begin
with, Chlorophyll is a process that absorbs sunlight and in turn,
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makes
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plants
look green.
Initially
, the sun
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sends
light energy that
is absorbed
along with carbon dioxide by the leaf. At the same time, water
is sucked
up by the roots and carried to the other parts of the
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plant
through the stomata. Carbon dioxide, water, and Sunlight mix in the leaf to create a type of sugar.

Oxygen and vapor are then released through the stomata which causes water loss in the
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leaves
and this process
is called
Transpiration.
Finally
, Excessive sugar which
is produced
is preserved
as starch in the roots of the
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plant
.
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IELTS essay Photsynthesis Process writing

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
150 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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