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personality of someone you know well

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Ms. Lan, my high school teacher is one of my favorite teachers during my school days. She was tall and slim with tan skin and curly black hair, brown eyes, and a shiny oval face. She is an extrovert who always likes to have fun. She has a great sense of humor and she always makes us laugh. She also often expresses her opinions openly, so we rarely have mutual misunderstandings. Besides that, she is a generous and sensitive person. she is perfect not only in teaching but also in all aspects of society, which makes her an example for students as well as for society. Her teaching method is simple and easy to understand which makes the lesson interesting and grabs our attention. Not only that, she always loves her students and forgives us like a mother. When we make mistakes she always makes us realize our mistakes in a very skillful way. Ms. Lan is really a teacher who is not only my real friend but also a sincere guide for the students.
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, my high school teacher is one of my favorite teachers during my school days. She was tall and slim with tan skin and curly black hair, brown eyes, and a shiny oval face. She is an extrovert who always likes to have fun.
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in all aspects of society, which
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her an example for students
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as for society. Her teaching method is simple and easy to understand which
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the lesson interesting and grabs our attention. Not
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that, she always
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her students and forgives us like a mother.
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IELTS essay personality of someone you know well

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  American English
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