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the map below show the changes Music Shop first floor in 2010 and present day

the map below show the changes Music Shop first floor in 2010 and present day rby9k

The pictures below illustrations the transformation of the Music Shop's first floor both in 2010 and now. It is immediately obvious that Music Shop first floor has made remarkable including new buildings and recreation facilities. The outside area was developed, which was one of the key alterations. Today, exhibition room 4 was separated into two sections: a temporary display space and a children's area. There will be no more coffee, but a music bar has been relocated to take its place, and the former music bar area has been replaced with a vending machine. The receptionist has been relocated to the entrance hall, rather than the stairwell, as it was in 2015. The lift will be eliminated, which is a minor alteration and a wheelchair ramp is located next to the entrance. So, it is clear that the Music Shop changed and expanded during this period.

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