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Percy Jackson & the Olympians

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Percy Jackson & the Olympians: The Lightning Thief, is the first book written by Rick Riordan, a fantastic science fiction novel, of the adventures of a young guy that he discovered that he’s a semi-god. The main character is Percy Jackson, he’s a troubled kid that lives in New York, and is studying in Yancy Academy. He’s tall and brown-haired with attention deficit disorder and who in a few chapters is going to discover that he is a half-blood. As far as I have read, there are 4 supporting characters. Firstly, his best friend, Grover, who has curly brown hair. In the first chapter, Percy says that he runs a bit weird. Nancy Bobofit is described as a red-headed kleptomaniac girl. She is a bad person, who always gets Percy in trouble because all the teachers trust her. Mrs Dodds, is the Georgian math teacher, I found funny that is seems like she feels like a fifty years old. And finally Mr Brunner, is a cool Latin teacher that rolls around in a motorized wheelchair. In the first chapter, they go by bus to an ancient Greek stuff museum with MrBrunner as the leading teacher. Mr Brunner starts the explanation, the kids talking make it hard for Percy to listen to him. And Mrs Dodds, the Math teacher, seems like she hates Percy because every time he tells kids to shut up, Mrs Dodds throws a look at him. Percy suspects that she is not a human. Nancy didn’t stop talking, very loud, and that made Percy advise her shouting. After that they go for lunch, outside there’s a big storm brewing. Percy figures its global warming. Nancy appears and throws her lunch in Grover’s lap. Percy tries to stay calmed, but finally he pushes her over the fountain, and he didn’t remember how. Mrs Dodds tells Percy to come with her, and Grover tries to protect him and says that he has done that. Unfortunately the teacher doesn’t believe it. Dodds calls Percy to come into the museum, makes a strange noise and tells him he will have problems, he finally disappears and Percy finds himself with a pencil in his hand and confused by the situation. Percy asks everybody where Mrs. Dodds went, but none of them know nothing about it.
Percy Jackson & the Olympians: The Lightning Thief, is the
first
book written by Rick Riordan, a fantastic science fiction novel, of the adventures of a young guy that he discovered that
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he’s
a semi-god.

The main character is Percy Jackson,
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he’s
a troubled kid that
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lives
in New York, and is studying in
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Yancy
Academy.
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He’s
tall and brown-haired with attention deficit disorder and who in a few chapters is going to discover that he is a half-blood.

As far as I have read, there are 4 supporting characters.
Firstly
, his best friend, Grover, who has curly brown hair. In the
first
chapter, Percy says that he runs a bit weird. Nancy
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is
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described
as a red-headed kleptomaniac girl. She is a
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bad
person, who always
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gets
Percy in trouble
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because
all the
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teachers
trust her.
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Mrs
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Dodds
, is the Georgian math
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teacher
, I found
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funny
that is
seems like she feels like a fifty years
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. And
finally
Mr
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Brunner
, is a cool Latin
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teacher
that rolls around in a motorized wheelchair.

In the
first
chapter, they go by bus to an ancient Greek stuff museum with
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MrBrunner
as the leading
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. Mr
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Brunner
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starts
the explanation, the kids talking
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it
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hard
for Percy to listen to him. And
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Mrs
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Dodds
, the Math
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teacher
, seems like she hates Percy
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because
every time he
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tells
kids to shut up,
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Mrs
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Dodds
throws a look at him. Percy suspects that she is not a human. Nancy didn’t
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stop
talking,
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very
loud, and that made Percy advise her shouting.

After that they go for lunch, outside there’s a
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big
storm brewing. Percy figures its global warming. Nancy appears and throws her lunch in Grover’s lap. Percy tries to stay calmed,
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but
finally
he pushes her over the fountain, and he didn’t remember how.
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Mrs
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Dodds
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tells
Percy to
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come
with her, and Grover tries to protect him and says that he has done that. Unfortunately the
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teacher
doesn’t believe it.

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Dodds
calls Percy to
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come
into the museum,
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makes
a strange noise and
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tells
him he will have problems, he
finally
disappears and Percy finds himself with a pencil in his hand and confused by the situation. Percy asks everybody where
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Mrs
.
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Dodds
went,
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but
none of them know nothing about it.
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IELTS essay Percy Jackson & the Olympians

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
383 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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