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In many countries smoking is illegal in public places.

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Smoking has been unlawful in public places like parks, beaches and public transportation in many nations. This essay totally agree with the given notion as it is injurious to health as well as it creates an adverse impact on youth which will be elaborated in further paragraphs. The main reason why public smoking should be prohibited is to protect people from the health diseases. Not only smokers get affected by smoking but also known as mokalo accidentally in hill other people strawberry ko smoke are highly prone to health issues like lung cancer heart diseases and respiratory difficulties. According, to World health organisation, after process beating public smoking the country observed the 69% reduction in the number of patients affected by passive smoking. The second reason is that forbidding smoking in public places prevents youth from getting attracted towards it. Smoking cigarettes is considered as a cool symbol by numerous dwellers and few teenagers may smoke just to enter in that category. By banning this products, youngsters will be less vulnerable to smoking and will not straightforwardly persuade that. For example, after declaring ban on smoking, The immense number of teenage smokers were declining day by day.
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has been unlawful in
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places like parks, beaches and
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transportation in
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notion as it is injurious to
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as well
as it creates an adverse impact on youth which will
be elaborated
in
further
paragraphs.

The main reason why
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public
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smoking
should
be prohibited
is to protect
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people
from the
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health
diseases. Not
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only
smokers
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smoking
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accidentally
in hill other
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health
issues like lung cancer heart diseases and respiratory difficulties. According, to World
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health
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, after process beating
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public
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the country observed the 69% reduction in the number of patients
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affected
by passive smoking.

The second reason is that forbidding
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smoking
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public
places
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prevents
youth from getting attracted towards it.
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Smoking
cigarettes
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as a cool symbol by numerous dwellers and few
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teenagers
may smoke
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products, youngsters will be less vulnerable to
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smoking
and will not
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persuade that.
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, after declaring ban on
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, The immense number of teenage smokers were declining day by day.
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IELTS essay In many countries smoking is illegal in public places.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
197 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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