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Perception of rejection. Tell us about your personal experience

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Everyone in their life faces rejection. Everybody accepts rejection in their own way. Someone is paralyzed by the fear of rejection, and someone knows how to accept rejection and move on. But the consequences of how you accept rejections are different. For example: Sanders, the KFC icon, couldn't sell his chickens to anyone. He received rejections from more than 1, 000 restaurants. But then the owners of one agreed, and now we can see his portrait on the signs of KFC restaurants around the world. But imagine that he was afraid of rejection and just gave up, then he would not have succeeded. Personally, I'm terribly afraid of rejection. To make you understand how much everything is running, I will tell you a story that happened to me 5 years ago. It was a normal day and I decided to go to the park. I took only 20 soms. 10 soms there and 10 soms back. And when it was time to leave, I realized that I had lost 5 soms. And I didn't have enough for the road. I had two choices, the first was to walk 4 kilometers to home or ask someone for 5 soms. I stood by the road for a long time trying to ask for money, and here was a friend standing nearby, we did not communicate with her, but we knew each other. It was the perfect chance, but even so, I was afraid that I would be rejected. And I went on foot. I have recalled this incident more than once. And he wasn't the only one. I couldn't even express my opinion because it seemed to me that everyone would condemn my opinion and reject it. I think this fear was experienced by many. At the time, it seemed normal to me and I thought that everything would change over time. But everything remained the same, although I was no longer afraid to express my opinion, this only applied to people close to me. In front of new acquaintances, I was afraid to express my opinion and only kept silent. I didn't want to get out of my comfort zone. I knew that if this continued, I wouldn't even be able to order a coffee. I didn't know where to start until I came across an interesting line in the book "Superman by habit", "30 days of rejection". It sounded intriguing and I started looking for more information. And that's how I came across Gia Ging's performance.
Everyone in their life faces
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rejection
. Everybody accepts
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rejection
in their
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own
way. Someone
is paralyzed
by the fear of
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rejection
, and someone knows how to accept
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rejection
and
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move
on.
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But
the consequences of how you accept
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rejections
are
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different
.
For example
: Sanders, the KFC icon, couldn't sell his chickens to anyone. He received
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rejections
from more than 1, 000 restaurants.
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But
then the owners of one
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agreed
, and
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now
we can
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see
his portrait on the signs of KFC restaurants around the world.
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But
imagine that he was
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afraid
of
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rejection
and
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just
gave up, then he would not have succeeded.
Personally
, I'm
terribly
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afraid
of
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rejection
. To
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make
you understand how much everything is running, I will
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you a story that happened to me 5 years ago. It was a normal day and I decided to go to the park. I took
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only
20
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soms
. 10
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soms
there and 10
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soms
back. And when it was
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time
to
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leave
, I realized that I had lost 5
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soms
. And I didn't have
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enough
for the road. I had two choices, the
first
was to walk 4 kilometers to home or ask someone for 5
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soms
. I stood by the road for a long
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time
trying to
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ask for
money, and here was a friend standing nearby, we did not communicate with her,
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but
we knew each other. It was the perfect chance,
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but
even
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so
, I was
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afraid
that I would
be rejected
. And I went on foot. I have recalled this incident more than once. And he wasn't the
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only
one. I couldn't even express my
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opinion
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because
it seemed to me that everyone would condemn my
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opinion
and reject it. I
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think
this fear
was experienced
by
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many
. At the
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time
, it seemed normal to me and I
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thought
that everything would
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change
over
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time
.
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But
everything remained the same, although I was no longer
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afraid
to express my
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opinion
, this
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only
applied to
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people
close to me. In front of new acquaintances, I was
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afraid
to express my
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opinion
and
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only
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kept
silent. I didn't want to
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get
out of my comfort zone. I knew that if this continued, I wouldn't even be able to order a coffee.
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I
didn't know where to
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start
until I came across an interesting line in the book
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Superman by habit
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,
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30 days of rejection
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. It sounded intriguing and I
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started
looking for more information. And that's how I came across
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Gia
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Ging
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IELTS essay Perception of rejection. Tell us about your personal experience

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
416 words
5.5
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