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What is your current thoughts

What is your current thoughts 3MxkX
I will never be the same. From now to eternity. How it happened to me it never supposed to. It was just game from start. What should I feel now? Regret, sorrow, crave to change everything? I cannot deny that I felt all of them. And what I should feel after? Relief? That is pathetic, I will not. I should sorrow until the end. I hate the way I think. My mind is contaminated. But sometimes my mind also wants to help. It not selfish, so am I? is this the way I flourish? I am changing myself for society or because of it. Everything is so permanent. I only can dream. You always move forward but you do not know for what. To be free? But it not what you should do to reach your destiny. Your problem is your desire. Which is too unclear. A little bit abstract. What is freedom to you? You cannot even answer to this question. Its financial independence, abundance of free time, rights to choose how to live. Isn’t it? On another hand you have dream to make contribution in science. Which require most of your time, money and style of your life. However, these two things are polar opposite. You cannot combine them. As both of them will gobble you whole. Choose. And only after move forward. Your dark path which you did not see before will light up. Not entirely but it would be enough to be confident. You want to be machine, to have clear instruction what to do. You do not want to think yourself because you afraid of consequences which your decision will cause. You acquire enough attention but even so you want more. You crave entire world attention. For what? To be more meaningful than you are now. You want world talk and want only you. That is too much for you. People’s attitude toward you particularly unclear. That’s alright. Take it easy. Nobody can feel your sadness neither you can.
I will never be the same. From
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now
to eternity. How it happened to me it never supposed to. It was
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just
game from
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start
. What should I feel
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now
? Regret, sorrow, crave to
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change
everything? I cannot deny that I felt all of them. And what I should feel after? Relief?
That is
pathetic, I will not. I should sorrow until the
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end
. I hate the way I
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think
. My mind
is contaminated
.
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But
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sometimes
my mind
also
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wants
to
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help
.
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It
not selfish,
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so
am I?
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is
this the way I flourish? I am changing myself for society or
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because
of it. Everything is
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so
permanent. I
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only
can dream. You always
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move
forward
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but
you do not know for what. To be free?
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But
it not what you should do to reach your destiny. Your problem is your desire. Which is too unclear. A
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little bit
abstract. What is freedom to you? You cannot even answer to this question. Its financial independence, abundance of free time, rights to choose how to
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live
. Isn’t it? On another hand you have dream to
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make
contribution in science. Which require most of your time, money and style of your life.
However
, these two things are polar opposite. You cannot combine them.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
both of them will gobble you whole. Choose. And
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only
after
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move
forward. Your dark path which you did not
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see
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before
will light up. Not
entirely
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but
it would be
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enough
to be confident. You
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want
to be
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machine
, to have
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clear
instruction what to do. You do not
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want
to
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think
yourself
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because
You miss the verb here. You should rather write: "you're afraid".
you afraid
of consequences which your decision will cause.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
You
acquire
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enough
attention
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but
even
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so
you
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want
more.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
You
crave entire world attention. For what? To be more meaningful than you are
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now
. You
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want
world talk and
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want
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only
you.
That is
too much for you.
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People
’s attitude toward you
particularly
unclear. That’s alright. Take it easy. Nobody can feel your sadness neither you can.
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IELTS essay What is your current thoughts

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
334 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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