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Talk about TV show characters you love

Talk about TV show characters you love 7W5aA
I love literati so much but I’d like to acknowledge that their relationship when they were dating wasn’t exactly as goals as most people tend to glamorize it. Jess was emotionally unavailable because of the way he was brought up and he didn’t treat rory right multiple times. But he did change for the better as the show progressed, he wasn’t the same jess who was sent to stars hollow in season 2, episode 5. Rory helped him see his potential and that’s an aspect that I particularly really love about their relationship. They both genuinely want the best for the other person, they push each other to be better versions of themselves, and they never stopped believing in the other person’s abilities to achieve great things in life.
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but
I’d like to acknowledge that their relationship when they were dating wasn’t exactly as goals as most
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people
tend to glamorize it. Jess was
emotionally
unavailable
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because
of the way he
was brought
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up and
he didn’t treat
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rory
right multiple times.

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he did
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change
for the better as the
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show
progressed, he wasn’t the same
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jess
who was
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sent
to stars hollow in season 2, episode 5. Rory
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helped
him
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see
his potential and that’s an aspect that I
particularly
really
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love
about their relationship.

They both
genuinely
want the best for the other person, they push each other to be better versions of themselves, and they never
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stopped
believing in the other person’s abilities to achieve great things in life.

IELTS essay Talk about TV show characters you love

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
129 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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