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Percentage of electricity production by fule source in France in 1990 and 2010

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The information about production of electricity by five different fuel source in two distinct year (1990 and 2010) in France rendered by pie chart. The data is calibrated in percentage To embark with, natural gas and coal used for production of electricity in 1990 and both percentage was 28 percent in France. Hydro power was 6% use as well as it was very less used for electricity production in 1990. 22 percent of oil used for production of electricity ( France ). Use of nuclear power rised by 50% from 17 percent to 67 percent (2010). Moreover, after 20 year, the use of hydro power was less (2 percent ) in France. In 2010, oil and coal was also same (13 percent ). 4 percent use of natural gas for production of electricity in France (2010). Overall, as per statistical information give by pie graph it is clear that although, the use of nuclear power was atleast, after 20 year it was used at high level

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