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Percentage change in taxation and consumer credit and consumer spending in the UK

Percentage change in taxation and consumer credit and consumer spending in the UK BJ5y6
The first figure illustrates the change in taxation and available consumer credit, in percentages. The second figure shows the consumer spending in the United Kingdom in food, house hold appliances, and clothing. Both figures show the changes between 1990 and 2010. The figures show, that available credit is porportional to consumer spendig. This means, that when available credit rises, consumer spending also appears to rise. For instance, consumer spending peaked in 2005, whereas available credit also peaked around the same time, in 2006. There has also been a decrease in both consumer credit and spending in 2010. The relationship between taxation and consumer spending is inversely proportional. When taxation falls, consumer spending appears to rise. Around 2005, then consumer spending is the highest, taxation appears to be the lowest. Overall, the figures show how taxation is inversely porportional to both available credit, and consumer spending in the UK.
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between 1990 and 2010.

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rises,
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peaked in 2005, whereas
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in 2010.

The relationship between
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is
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falls,
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appears to rise. Around 2005, then
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is the highest,
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appears to be the lowest.

Overall
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in the UK.
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IELTS essay Percentage change in taxation and consumer credit and consumer spending in the UK

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