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an increase in production of consumer goods result in damaging the environment. what are the cause of this and give your opinion.

an increase in production of consumer goods result in damaging the environment. what are the cause of this and give your opinion. Ajed1
It has been observed that, nowadays most of the people are a concern about environmental because of the production of goods are increasing rapidly as a consequence, it effects on nature. I would like to discuss some majora cause and solution of this problem. discussing in the reasons, the most common one is that day by day population of nation rose dramatically so that it directly impacts on demand of production. Due to this, industry must need to establish new factory. Therefor, they cut the forest, build a new industry and fulfill the demand of a consumer. Global warming related problem because of textile mile release a toxic water into river, chemical industry emite smoke in air. For instance, an extensive survey conducted by Oxford University students reveals that 30 percentage of forest cut down because of the above mentioned problem. The best way to mitigate the problem, the first and foremost is that the government must take a serious decision about the environmental problem and makeup restriction for a factory. It is not only good for the nature but also people live healthy life. Moreover, citizen of a country also give contribute toward the nature than neverr buy such product, which is harmful for the environment. For example, New Zealand authority by a tire from other country, this is because, trie factory make a lot of smoke, air pollution create very bad in the location of factory so that they decided to we cannot build the industry in New Zealand because of health problems. To conclude, it cannot be finally commented that the production of consumer goods very harmful for nature as well as animalsl too. so, authority of nation has to take a valuable decision.
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been observed
that, nowadays most of the
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people
are a concern about environmental
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because
of the production of
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goods
are increasing
rapidly
as a consequence, it effects on
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nature
. I would like to discuss
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some
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majora
cause and solution of this problem.

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discussing
in the reasons, the most common one is that day by day population of nation rose
dramatically
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so
that it
directly
impacts on demand of production. Due to this,
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industry
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must
need to establish
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new
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factory
. Therefor, they
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cut
the forest, build a
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new
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industry
and fulfill the demand of a consumer. Global warming related problem
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because
of textile mile release
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a toxic water
into river, chemical
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industry
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emite
smoke in air.
For instance
, an extensive survey conducted by Oxford University students reveals that 30 percentage of forest
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cut
down
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because
of the above mentioned problem.

The best way to mitigate the problem, the
first
and foremost is that the
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government
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must
take a serious decision about the environmental problem and makeup restriction for a
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factory
. It is not
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only
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good
for the
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nature
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but
also
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people
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live
healthy life.
Moreover
, citizen of a country
also
give contribute toward the
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nature
than
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neverr
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buy
such product, which is harmful for the environment.
For example
,
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New
Zealand authority by a tire from other country, this is
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because
,
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trie
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factory
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make
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a lot of
smoke, air pollution create
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very
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bad
in the location of
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factory
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so
that they decided to we cannot build the
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industry
in
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New
Zealand
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because
of health problems.

To conclude
, it cannot be
finally
commented that the production of consumer
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goods
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very
harmful for
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nature
as well
as
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animalsl
too.
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so
, authority of nation
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has to
take a valuable decision.
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IELTS essay an increase in production of consumer goods result in damaging the environment. what are the cause of this and give your opinion.

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  American English
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