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PEOPLES SHOPPING HABITS DEPEND MORE ON THE AGE GROUP THEY BELONG TO THAN ANY OTHER FACTORS . TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGRE?

PEOPLES SHOPPING HABITS DEPEND MORE ON THE AGE GROUP THEY BELONG TO THAN ANY OTHER FACTORS. XyMXO

SHOPPING INTEREST OF A PERSON USUALLY DIFFER FROM INDIVIDUAL TO INDIVIDUAL AND ALSO IT DIFFER IN AGE GROUP TOO. SO FROM MY POINT OF VIEW I STRONGLY AGREE WITH FACT THAT SHOPPING HABITS DEPENDS MORE ON AGE GROUP. TEENAGERS WERE ALWAYS UP-TO-DATE WITH THE CHANGING TRENDS IN SHOPPING. THEY ARE THE HUGE ADDICTS OF ONLINE SHOPPING. THEY PURCHASE GADGETS AND OTHER USELESS STUFF AND WASTE MOST OF THEIR POCKET MONEY ON THRM RATHER THAN SPENDING IT ON USEFUL MATERIALS. TODAYS GENERATION COMPLETELY DEPENDEND ON AMAZON, FLIPKART LIKE ONLINE SHOPPING APPLICATIONS WHICH ALWAYS ATTRACT THESE TEENAGE ANG YOUTH WITH THEIR FANCY OFFERS, FOR WHICH THEY KNOW THEY WILL GET BENEFITS. THEY DO NOT PLAN THEIR FINANCIAL STATUS. THEY SPEND MOST OF THERE MONEY IN GADGETS, CLOTHES, WHICH THEY WILL GET WITH ONE TAP AT THEIR DOORSTEPS. WHILE LOOKING TO THE ADULT AND OLD AGE PEOPLE, IT IS CLEAR THAT EVENTHOUGH THEY LIKE ONLINE SHOPPING THEY ALWAYS GOES TO THE SHOP AND BUY IT. THEY ALSO DEPEND ON AMAZON AND ALL OTHER SHOPPING SITE BUT, ONLY BUY WHATS ESSENTIAL FOR THEM. THEY ALWAYS PLAN AND BUY ACCORDING THEIR FINANCIAL STATUS. WITH THE CHANGING TRENDS ESPECIALLY THE OLD AGE THEY ARE NOT AT ALL CONCERNED ABOUT THESE CHANGES, WHILE ADULTS ARE AWARE OF THESE CHANGES AND PLAN ACCORDINGLY WITHIN THEIR BUDGET. THE COVID PANDEMIC ALSO PLAYED A MAJOR ROLE IN CHANGING SHOPPING HABITS TOO. LOCKDOWN DAYS MADE ALL PEOPLE TO STAY AT HOME AND THAT MADE THEM LAZY TO GO OUTSIDE SHOPPING. AGAIN EVERYTHING INCLUDING VEGETABLES, MEAT, CLOTHES, ELECTRICAL ITEMS ARE JUST ONE CLICK AWAY. IN CONCLUSION I CAN SAY THAT TEENAGERS ARE THE MAIN VICTIMS ON CHANGING TRENDS IN SHOPPING WHILE ADULTS AND OLD AGE ARE ADAPTING THE CHANGES BUT DO NOT HAVE CRAZE LIKE YOUTH.

You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
SHOPPING
 INTEREST OF A PERSON USUALLY
 DIFFER FROM INDIVIDUAL TO INDIVIDUAL AND ALSO
 IT DIFFER IN You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
AGE
 GROUP TOO. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
SO
 FROM MY POINT OF VIEW I STRONGLY
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
AGREE
 WITH FACT THAT You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
SHOPPING
 HABITS DEPENDS MORE ON You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
AGE
 GROUP.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenilesadolescents
TEENAGERS
 WERE ALWAYS UP-TO-DATE WITH THE You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuncertaindynamicunstablegrowingchangeabledeveloping
CHANGING
 TRENDS IN You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
SHOPPING
. THEY ARE THE HUGE ADDICTS OF ONLINE You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
SHOPPING
. THEY This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
PURCHASE
 GADGETS AND OTHER USELESS STUFF AND WASTE MOST OF THEIR POCKET MONEY ON Possible spelling mistake found.ThemTermThruThermThrumHRM
THRM
RATHER
 THAN SPENDING IT ON USEFUL MATERIALS. Possible spelling mistake found.TodayTODAY S
TODAYS
 GENERATION COMPLETELY Possible spelling mistake found.DependentDependedDEPEND END
DEPENDEND
 ON AMAZON, FLIPKART LIKE ONLINE You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
SHOPPING
 APPLICATIONS WHICH ALWAYS ATTRACT THESE TEENAGE ANG YOUTH WITH THEIR FANCY OFFERS, FOR WHICH THEY KNOW THEY WILL This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
GET
 BENEFITS. THEY DO NOT PLAN THEIR FINANCIAL STATUS. THEY SPEND MOST OF THERE MONEY IN GADGETS, CLOTHES, WHICH THEY WILL This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
GET
 WITH ONE TAP AT THEIR DOORSTEPS.

WHILE LOOKING TO THE ADULT AND This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
OLD
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
AGE
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
PEOPLE
, IT IS This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
CLEAR
 THAT Possible spelling mistake found.Overthought
EVENTHOUGH
 THEY LIKE ONLINE You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
SHOPPING
 THEY ALWAYS The pronoun 'THEY' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "go"Go
GOES
 TO THE SHOP AND This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
BUY
 IT. THEY ALSO
 DEPEND ON AMAZON AND ALL OTHER You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
SHOPPING
 SITE This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
BUT
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
ONLY
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
BUY
Possible spelling mistake foundWHAT'S
WHATS
 ESSENTIAL FOR THEM. THEY ALWAYS PLAN AND Did you mean "by"?By
BUY
 ACCORDING THEIR FINANCIAL STATUS. WITH THE You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuncertaindynamicunstablegrowingchangeabledeveloping
CHANGING
 TRENDS ESPECIALLY
 THE This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
OLD
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
AGE
 THEY ARE NOT AT ALL CONCERNED ABOUT THESE This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
CHANGES
, WHILE ADULTS ARE AWARE OF THESE This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
CHANGES
 AND PLAN ACCORDINGLY
 WITHIN THEIR BUDGET.

THE Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?COVID-19Covid-19
COVID
 PANDEMIC ALSO
 PLAYED A MAJOR ROLE IN You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuncertaindynamicunstablegrowingchangeabledeveloping
CHANGING
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
SHOPPING
 HABITS TOO. LOCKDOWN DAYS MADE ALL This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
PEOPLE
 TO STAY AT HOME AND THAT MADE THEM LAZY TO GO OUTSIDE You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
SHOPPING
. AGAIN EVERYTHING INCLUDING VEGETABLES, MEAT, CLOTHES, ELECTRICAL ITEMS ARE This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
JUST
 ONE CLICK AWAY.

IN The comma is probably missing here: "CONCLUSION, I".CONCLUSION, I
CONCLUSION I
 CAN SAY THAT This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenilesadolescents
TEENAGERS
 ARE THE MAIN VICTIMS ON You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuncertaindynamicunstablegrowingchangeabledeveloping
CHANGING
 TRENDS IN You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
SHOPPING
 WHILE ADULTS AND This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
OLD
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
AGE
 ARE ADAPTING THE This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
CHANGES
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
BUT
 DO NOT HAVE Use past participle here: "crazed".Crazed
CRAZE
 LIKE YOUTH. 