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when it comes to my best friend, off the top of my head, without a doubt i will say that it is William. i still remember to this day that i met him when i was engage in a school activities, i was impressed by his incomparable beauty as well as his communication skills, moreover. He is a extremely kind-hearted person, when i was in grade 8 i was felling under the weather and he was the only person that took me to the hospital and we become best friend since then last but not least he is also superiorly intelligence therefore every teacher really like him. in conclusion i am so lucky to have a friend like him

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IELTS essay write a description about your friend

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

118 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 5.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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