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People's shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than any other factors. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People's shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than any other factors. Gm52

Getting older humans priorities has changed around 180 degree such as purchasing. I consider that the reason lay behind making shopping unpopular activity is not only age but also some circumstances such as unhealthy physical condition or not enough funding. It is an undeniable fact that elderly age population are the less seem generation we can meet in any buying center. For example in big malls or other shopping centers kids, youngsters and adults are more enthusiastic to buy something or hanging out with acquaintances. Old people tend to buy their daily demand products but not much. On the other hand there are many people around with disabilities or have net enough money to make ends meet. These factors are also crucial and effect the daily habits of human-being. For instance, in some destinations people have no chance to do shopping every day. Overall, some factors are impact our choice of buying something we need.

Getting older humans priorities has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 around 180 degree such as purchasing. I consider that the reason lay behind making shopping unpopular activity is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 age This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 circumstances such as unhealthy physical condition or not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 funding. It is an undeniable fact that elderly age population are the less seem generation we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 in any buying center. For example
 in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 malls or other shopping centers kids, youngsters and adults are more enthusiastic to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 something or hanging out with acquaintances. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
Old
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 tend to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 their daily demand products This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not much. On the other hand
 there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 around with disabilities or have net This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 money to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 ends This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
. These factors are also
 crucial and effect the daily habits of human-being. For instance
, in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 destinations This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 have no chance to The usual collocation for an activity ending in "-ing" is "go" not "do" or "play." Revise: "go shopping".go shopping
do shopping
 every day. Overall
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 factors are impact our choice of buying something we need. 