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Some people prefer to travel alone. Others like to travel in groups. Which do you think is the best way to travel?

Some people prefer to travel alone. Others like to travel in groups. Which do you think is the best way to travel? PY5J
Nowadays, traveling became a way for relaxing and learning about new places. Some people prefer to alone, others prefer group traveling. independent traveling is my preference for several reasons. Firstly, solo traveling is wholly fitted on you, you don’t have any schedule, that you have to follow, you can go anywhere and have whatever you want. I strongly believe, that it makes you a more independent person and teaches you how to tackle(solve) problems on your own. as I guess, being helped may sound appealing. In addition, Researches held in Britain showed that 66% of people prefer solo traveling. Depending on my experience, I always return with few new skills after alone traveling.
Nowadays, traveling became a way for relaxing and learning about new places.
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prefer to alone, others prefer group traveling.
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independent
traveling is my preference for several reasons.

Firstly
, solo traveling is wholly fitted on you, you don’t have any schedule, that you
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have to
follow, you can go anywhere and have whatever you want. I
strongly
believe, that it
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makes
you a more independent person and teaches you how to tackle(solve) problems on your
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own
.
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as
I guess, being
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helped
may sound appealing.
In addition
, Researches held in Britain
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showed
that 66% of
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people
prefer solo traveling. Depending on my experience, I always return with few new
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skills
after alone traveling.
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IELTS essay Some people prefer to travel alone. Others like to travel in groups. Which do you think is the best way to travel?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
113 words
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