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people today move to new cities or countries more than ever before what challenges do they experience but strategy are these to meet the challenges use the reasons and specific examples to support your answer

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It is a reputable, fact that human being faced various type of problems in their life. More individuals recently brain drain Newtown and Nations as compared to past. This essay will examine language barrier and job finding huge challenges of this and obtain better knowledge before moving countries and join language centre and some solution for this. To begin with, the first challenges faced people after brain drain is language barrier. To elaborate it, if masses have settled to new regions and any person do not know the any countries native language and they would suffer language barriers and not conveniently communicate to other multitudes. Moreover, they have a face the complications for your finding because any nation regime sport their local people and provide job opportunity local persons rather than standards for instance the recent survey of China showed that 79% people face unemployment effect that only language barrier. On the other hand, the flok gain proper knowledge and information before removing any country. In the other words, there are numerous centre that teach the any nation language if any person move to any country they join this type of centre and learn native language which they moved and learn some interpersonal skills as a result with interpersonal skills they can easily communicate and attraction with others for epitome the newspaper New York show that 89% human working other countries instead of their local nation a going fact that they know the native language of their country. In conclusion, if any person moved and other countries they face the language problems and learn some skills, language and countries before move is fruitful for human.
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as compared to past. This essay will examine
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language
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barrier
and job finding huge challenges of this and obtain better knowledge
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before
moving
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countries
and
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join
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language
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centre
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some
solution for this.

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first
challenges faced
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people
after brain drain is
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language
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barrier
. To elaborate it, if masses have settled to new regions and any
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person
do not know the any
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countries
native
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language and
they would suffer
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language
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barriers
and not
conveniently
communicate to
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other
multitudes.
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, they have a face the complications for your finding
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because
any
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nation
regime sport their local
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people
and provide job opportunity local
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persons
rather
than standards
for instance
the recent survey of China
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showed
that 79%
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people
face unemployment effect that
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only
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language
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barrier
. On the
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hand, the
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gain proper knowledge and information
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before
removing any
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country
. In the
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other
words, there are numerous
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centre
that teach the any
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nation
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language
if any
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person
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move
to any
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country
they
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join
this type of
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centre
and learn native
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language
which they
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some
interpersonal
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show
that 89% human working
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other
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countries
instead
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nation
a going fact that they know the native
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language
of their country.

In conclusion
, if any
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person
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moved
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other
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they face the
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language
problems and learn
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some
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skills
,
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and
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countries
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before
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move
is fruitful for human.
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IELTS essay people today move to new cities or countries more than ever before what challenges do they experience but strategy are these to meet the challenges use the reasons and specific examples to support your answer

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
275 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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