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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. People think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others believe that there are other alternative solutions for reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion on this topic. You should write at least 250 words.

In order to achieve the decline rate of crime, some people purpose that an appropriate way is to state the particular with severe imprisonment while, few suggest to come out with different ideas to sort it out. In this essay, I would like to detail both the perspectives and conclude with my own suggestions. On one hand, the Constitution has defined the law of punishment to reassure that, the person recognizes his/her own mistake and thus, leading to the healthy society. Certain categories of people insist the court to provide prison life for prolonged period that might end –up in destroying one’s life after prison as the society will judge based on past happenings, even though it is suggested for good cause. For instance, their reasons might be because if sociopath or serial killers are released soon, they will eventually create a fear among other individuals which is their driving force to commit crimes. On the other hand, the severity of the punishment should depend upon the intensity of the crime, is suggested by few sectors of the society. The sole reason for their crime might be because of the influence of the surroundings as in case of pickpocketing or chain snatching. As most of the people are under the below poverty line and to survive in life, they don’t have any other options but to commit crime. These crimes are to be encountered ironically without affecting the individual’s family. To sum up, I would recount that the individual’s punishment should be determined based on the circumstances and also the depth of the crime committed. If that’s related to psychology issues, the Government can enroll them in the rehabilitation centre and provide proper treatment so that, they can live their happily ever after.
In order to achieve the decline rate of
crime
,
some
people
purpose that an appropriate way is to state the particular with severe imprisonment while, few suggest to
come
out with
different
ideas
to sort it out. In this essay, I would like to detail both the perspectives and conclude with my
own
suggestions.

On one hand, the Constitution has defined the law of punishment to reassure that, the person recognizes his/her
own
mistake and
thus
, leading to the healthy society. Certain categories of
people
insist the court to provide prison life for prolonged period that might
end
–up in destroying one’s life after prison as the society will judge based on past happenings,
even though
it
is suggested
for
good
cause.
For instance
, their reasons might be
because
if sociopath or serial killers
are released
soon
, they will
eventually
create a fear among other individuals which is their driving force to commit crimes.

On the other hand
, the severity of the punishment should depend upon the intensity of the
crime
,
is suggested
by few sectors of the society. The sole reason for their
crime
might be
because
of the influence of the surroundings as in case of
pickpocketing
or chain snatching. As most of the
people
are under the below poverty line and to survive in life, they don’t have any other options
but
to commit
crime
. These
crimes
are to
be encountered
ironically
without affecting the individual’s family.

To sum up, I would recount that the individual’s punishment should
be determined
based on the circumstances and
also
the depth of the
crime
committed. If that’s related to psychology issues, the
Government
can enroll them in the rehabilitation
centre
and provide proper treatment
so
that, they can
live
their
happily
ever after.
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IELTS essay People think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others believe that there are other alternative solutions for reducing crime.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
293 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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