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People think that some countries can be both economically successful and clean their environment, Whereas some of them disagree. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

People think that some countries can be both economically successful and clean their environment, Whereas some of them disagree. with this statement? pRKkD
It is pervasive stereotype that economic and finantial success in a country is proportional to countrie’s tideness. Normally people imagine of very magnificant city in developed country. Meanwhile, when people normally think of developing countries, some untidiness image comes to mind. Overall this writing will deal with other perspective the development and the cleaness of the city. First of all, many splendid city which is known as success at their economic state such as New york, Paris, London, Beijing. . ect is very far from cleaness. It’s magnitude of economic value is leading however poverty and dirtyness is overshaded in the capital cities. Presumably there are uncleaned area or even tourist attraction area is not well managed. Overall no where is tide seemingly regardless of their economic magnitude whether city is developed or underdeveloped. It is avoidable matter of untidiness, no at least cleanesss. The reason of untidiness of capital city could vary, however in general the strict rule could not be applied to citizen. Contrary to most developed capital, Singapore that is city country have strictly legislated law for people. For instance spitting is banned in this country and the government charge the fine in this case. So contrary to other city Singapore could maintain clean environment. Furthermore, all economically developed countries allow millions of traveller who do not follow basic rule regarding cleaness. Mostly it is reported that the tremendous trash is illegally left by anonymous travellers. Meanwhile there is special occation in South Korea. There haven’t had official trash bin in this country in every street. Some people just left domestic gabage in the public trash bin which is free to deal with though. So that government at some point haven’t allowed public trash bin at all. Eventually there is more serious problem occurs, the trash which is supposed be at one place scattered everywhere. There are complicated numerous reason why developed country can not control tideness but overall all basic system can not come up with stunning development in addition to citizen’s matureness. Overall, system of cleanness is required regadless of rich or poor country.
It is pervasive stereotype that
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economic
and
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finantial
success in a
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country
is proportional to
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countrie
’s
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tideness
.
Normally
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people
imagine of
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very
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magnificant
city in
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developed
country.

Meanwhile, when
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people
normally
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think
of developing
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countries
,
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some
untidiness image
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comes
to mind.

Overall
this writing will deal with other perspective the development and the
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cleaness
of the city.

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First of all
,
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many
splendid city which
is known
as success at their
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economic
state such as
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New york
, Paris, London, Beijing.
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.
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ect
is
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very
far from
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cleaness
.

It’s magnitude of
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economic
value is leading
however
poverty and
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dirtyness
is
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overshaded
in the capital
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cities
. Presumably there
are uncleaned
area or even tourist attraction area is not well managed.

Overall
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no
where is tide
seemingly
regardless of their
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economic
magnitude whether city is
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developed
or underdeveloped.

It is avoidable matter of untidiness,
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no
at least
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cleanesss
.

The reason of untidiness of capital city could vary,
however
in general
the strict
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rule
could not
be applied
to citizen.

Contrary to most
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developed
capital, Singapore
that is
city
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country
have
strictly
legislated law for
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people
.
For instance
spitting
is banned
in this
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country
and the
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government
charge the fine
in this case
.
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So
contrary to other city Singapore could maintain clean environment.

Furthermore
, all
economically
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developed
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countries
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allow
millions of
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traveller
who do not follow basic
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rule
regarding
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cleaness
.

Mostly
it
is reported
that the tremendous
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trash
is
illegally
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left
by anonymous
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travellers
.

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Meanwhile
there is special
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occation
in South Korea.

There haven’t had official
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trash
bin in this
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country
in every street.
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Some
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people
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just
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left
domestic
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gabage
in the public
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trash
bin which is free to deal with though.

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So that
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government
at
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some
point haven’t
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allowed
public
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trash
bin at all.
Eventually
there is more serious problem occurs, the
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trash
which
is supposed
be at one place scattered everywhere.

There
are complicated
numerous reason why
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developed
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country
can not control
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tideness
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but
overall
all basic system can not
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come
up with stunning development
in addition
to citizen’s
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matureness
.

Overall
, system of cleanness
is required
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regadless
of rich or poor
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country
.
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IELTS essay People think that some countries can be both economically successful and clean their environment, Whereas some of them disagree. with this statement?

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