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Some people believe that students should study at home , others believe they should study in school. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that students should study at home, others believe they should study in school. YLwYK
“Knowledge is power” said an eminent philosopher. Studying is an essential part of gaining knowledge and there are numerous opinions as of whether the studies should be continued at school or at home. I believe having studied at school helps a student achieve holistic development in comparison to having study at home. Studying at school provides an exposure to more practical knowledge as its going to a temple of learning and gaining knowledge physically and not just in theory. Practical experiences are more knowledgeable as they provide experiences that are unforgettable. Moreover, attending school helps a student to meet different people and helps the student to understand the diverse minds around him as well as how to adjust around the diverse minds. Afterall, Unity is in Diversity. By learning to adapt well to their environment the student become fearless of new opportunities as they can adjust with differences in opinions as well. A recent survey that was conducted shows that approximately 65% of school friends are for lifetime. School helps students have an extensive social life as well as make friends that can be relied upon in the time of need. However, after highlighting the benefits of studying at school, it is also worth noting that by studying at home bullying and harassment that takes place is avoided with the obnoxious affect of that on student’s life. To recapitulate, student life is enhanced at school with wonderful experiences and memories. It is paramount to take these experiences for future adaptability. Even after some unpleasant memories at school, they help is facing life due to learning manifested in early stages of life.
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is power” said an eminent philosopher. Studying is an essential part of gaining
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knowledge
and there are numerous opinions as of whether the studies should
be continued
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school
or at home. I believe having studied at
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school
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helps
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student
achieve holistic development
in comparison
to having study at home.

Studying at
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school
provides an exposure to more practical
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knowledge
as
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its
going to a temple of learning and gaining
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knowledge
physically
and not
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just
in theory. Practical
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experiences
are more knowledgeable as they provide
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experiences
that are unforgettable.

Moreover
, attending
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school
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helps
a
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student
to
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meet
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different
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people
and
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helps
the
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student
to understand the diverse minds around him
as well
as how to adjust around the diverse minds.
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Afterall
, Unity is in Diversity. By learning to adapt well to their environment the
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student
become fearless of new opportunities as they can adjust with differences in opinions
as well
.

A recent survey that
was conducted
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shows
that approximately 65% of
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school
friends are for lifetime.
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School
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helps
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students
have an extensive social
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life
as well
as
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make
friends that can
be relied
upon in the time of need.
However
, after highlighting the benefits of studying at
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school
, it is
also
worth noting that by studying at home bullying and harassment that takes place
is avoided
with the obnoxious affect of that on
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student’s
life.

To recapitulate,
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student
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life
is enhanced
at
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school
with wonderful
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experiences
and memories. It is paramount to take these
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experiences
for future adaptability. Even after
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some
unpleasant memories at
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school
, they
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help
is facing
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life
due to learning manifested in early stages of
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life
.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that students should study at home, others believe they should study in school.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
271 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
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