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people spend too much time on personal enjoyment rather than doing things they should do

people spend too much time on personal enjoyment rather than doing things they should do eKPmW

The passage provides some reasons to explain the usages of gigantic building Chaco canyon in New Mexico which professors points out another compelling reasons against the passage in order to refute the passage’s theories. Firstly, the inside of the building was not suitable for being a residential place for hundreds of people due to the lack of fire places for a number of people. Only few number of fire place were found there which made it impossible for people to live there which this explanation of the professor conflict the passage theory that people could have lived there. Secondly, excavations have not found any sign of maize to be stored there according to the professor. Conversely, the passage says that that structure was a storage for their food supplies. The last reason which professor claims to refute the passage’s theory was that that building could have been used as a landfill to their garbage be kept and those pots that were found there might have been only litter that people who were constructors might have left there. This reason also refuses the theory of the passage which advances the building was used as a ceremonial land for its residents. In the modern world, people are obliged to work as much as they can only for the survival due to the fact that as time goes by the necessity of being able to provide a condition for living is getting more arduous. Meanwhile a number of people consider this crucial to solely spend time for themselves to live happily and they do not take this mandatory and serious to do duties that they require to do for having a better life. The question is whether humans dedicate a lot of amount of time for doing something that they enjoy or not instead of doing something that is pivotal. I profoundly conflict with this consensus that says people are enjoying of what they really want instead of doing what they really are supposed to do owing of some reasons. Two of which will be explained in the ensuing essay. To begin with, nowadays, if people spend a lot of time on what they ready would rather do, which might not be financially beneficial, they will not be able to earn a living. Having a decent salary to be able to support yourself and your family member is a tall task thesedays due to the fact that we are facing inflation in entire world. We encounter a degree of obstacles which oblige humans to have at least two jobs simultaneously. Working too hard eliminate this possibility for people to enjoy their lives because they have to work from the morning to night and they only might find couple of hours on weekends to chill out and use their spare time in a way they really intend. It reminds me of the time that I had to have a part-time job after I attended my university’s courses which forced me to never have a leisure time for years. Another reason worth mentioning is that most of the people have no access to what makes them euphoric and satisfied with. Although many of the people tend to enjoy of their lives, lack of the time and money have a significant and remarkable influence of avoid them from enjoying of their lives or doing whatever they want. As we see in deprived places of the world such as Africa that people even have no access to water or basic needs. As a result, these people only might look for finding a way for their survival and never consider the possibility of doing something that brings happiness for them. All in all, lack of amount of time for humans to do what they really wish and lack of access to basic needs might omit or reduce the possibility of enjoying of their lives.

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