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People shouldn’t take as much as interest as they do in the do in the lives of celebrities and the gossip surrounding them. Do you agree or disagree?

People shouldn’t take as much as interest as they do in the do in the lives of celebrities and the gossip surrounding them. q06KP

Nowadays media is so active that they are publishing the private information of the famous people without even taken the consent of them. Some persons think this should be allowed and other think this practice should be stop as everyone have right to keep there private life in privacy. In my view this is wrong and this must be control or even stopped. In my view, this is wrong to expose or to telecast the privacy of any person because everyone has the right to have their known privacy and media don't have any right to telecast it without any consent from them. Therefor some control or restriction should be put on the media or some legal action should be taken on media for doing all this. On the other hand, Some people believe that celebrities, by choosing their job, have accepted to be exposed to rumors and have exposed their privacy to everyone. Other people believe that celebrities will gain more fame or be in the news by spreading rumors about themselves or their families, and the number of their followers in cyberspace will increase with this action. In conclusion, I feel that people and Media should think before telecasting anything which is personal and government should take some legal action if anything unnecessary is been publish by them.

Nowadays You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewstelevisionradiopublishing
media
 is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 active that they are publishing the private information of the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 without even taken the consent of them. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 persons This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 this should be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
 and other This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 this practice should be Did you mean  "stopped"?stopped
stop
 as everyone The pronoun 'everyone' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "has", "had".hashad
have
 right to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 there private life in privacy. In my view this is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
 and this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 be control or even This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceaseddiscontinued
stopped
.

In my view, this is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
 to expose or to telecast the privacy of any person This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 everyone has the right to have their known privacy and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewstelevisionradiopublishing
media
 don't have any right to telecast it without any consent from them. Therefor This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 control or restriction should be put
 on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewstelevisionradiopublishing
media
 or This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 legal action should be taken
 on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewstelevisionradiopublishing
media
 for doing all this.

On the other hand
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 believe that celebrities, by choosing their job, have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
accepted
 to be exposed
 to rumors and have exposed their privacy to everyone. Other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 believe that celebrities will gain more fame or be in the news by spreading rumors about themselves or their families, and the number of their followers in cyberspace will increase with this action.

In conclusion
, I feel that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewstelevisionradiopublishing
Media
 should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 telecasting anything which is personal and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 should take This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 legal action if anything unnecessary is been
Consider using a past participle here: "published".published
publish
 by them. 