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People should study whatever they like or should be allowed attend study scientific and technology. To what extent you agree or disagree.

People should study whatever they like or should be allowed attend study scientific and technology. VYNk7
The modern civilization has been emerged to a sophisticated and an upgraded niche due to the human's trait of exploring unknown and undiscovered ideas. All the developments of current world have become possible owing to the tendency of doing something whatever people want to do; significantly it is an extreme truth that, making someone compelled for any specific task, can bring no positive outcomes in the long run. This essay will elucidate the conception between studying anything with willingness or making fixed to have knowledge regarding science and technology is suitable. Universities of a country or world are a platform for enriching and making people more developed and humans have the golden opportunity to do according to their will in this platform. For that reason, students should be allowed to choose their departments since they are brought up and grow adult with a certain desire from early childhood, following this thing, it becomes their right to study whatever they love according to their merit or qualifications. For example, if a boy has an eerie of mathematics rather has a passion of music, but his parents force him to study with thge science group in order to be a doctor, he will get no rejoice in the subjects of science groups, resulting to this, either he will fail or he will be frustrated with hus education. In these circumstances, all deserve educational developments which must not be forced uopn them. Prominently, it is a universal visual aspect that, our days are now mostly relied on technology. We are enjoying enormous tremendous benefits of technology which have made our survival extremely smooth and vigorous. Obviously, this would not become accomplished if university graduates were not graduated from the courses involving to the engineering or medical studies. However, a country’s flourishment depends on the balanced relationship between the upgradation of science or technology, and other improvements. For instance, if there becomes an unparallel situation, this will cause unhealthy effects upon the society. To confine, all the disciplines need to be made available for everyone for their higher studies and research.
The modern civilization has
been emerged
to a sophisticated and an upgraded niche due to the human's trait of exploring unknown and undiscovered
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ideas
. All the developments of
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current
world have
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become
possible owing to the tendency of doing something whatever
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people
want to do;
significantly
it is an extreme truth that, making someone compelled for any specific task, can bring no
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positive
outcomes in the long run. This essay will elucidate the conception between studying anything with willingness or making
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fixed
to have knowledge regarding
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science
and
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technology
is suitable. Universities of a country or world are a platform for enriching and making
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
more developed and humans have the golden opportunity to do according to their will in this platform. For that reason, students should be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
allowed
to choose their departments since they
are brought
up and grow adult with a certain desire from early childhood, following this thing, it
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becomes
their right to
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study
whatever they
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love
according to their merit or qualifications.
For example
, if a boy has
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an eerie of
mathematics
rather
has a passion of music,
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but
his parents force him to
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study
with
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thge
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science
group in order to be a doctor, he will
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get
no rejoice in the subjects of
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science
groups, resulting to this, either he will fail or he will
be frustrated
with
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hus
education. In these circumstances, all deserve educational developments which
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must
not
be forced
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uopn
them.
Prominently
, it is a universal visual aspect that, our days are
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now
mostly
relied on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
technology
. We are enjoying enormous tremendous benefits of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
technology
which have made our survival
extremely
smooth and vigorous.
Obviously
, this would not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
become
accomplished if university graduates were not graduated from the courses involving to the engineering or medical
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studies
.
However
, a country’s
Possible spelling mistake found.
flourishment
depends on the balanced relationship between the
Possible spelling mistake found.
upgradation
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
science
or
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
technology
, and other improvements.
For instance
, if there
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
becomes
an
Possible spelling mistake found.
unparallel
situation, this will cause unhealthy effects upon the society. To confine, all the disciplines need to
be made
available for everyone for their higher
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
studies
and research.
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IELTS essay People should study whatever they like or should be allowed attend study scientific and technology.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
347 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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