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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing.

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Life is always challenging. We have to make preferences lots of time during lifetime. Some of our choices may be good but also many of them may not be good. We live according to our own preferences generally. However, sometimes we could not decide what to do and I agree that people should have to do things that they do not enjoy doing such as working with unfriendly guys, studying in a school reluctantly. First of all, we need to work and earn money to live. Some people have a work place which may be unpleasant. For example; he has a manager who never thanks to his team or he may have a co-worker who always tends to illustrate a project’s success as if his own success. Needless to say, changing job contains much risk because in today’s world finding a job is very difficult and there are lots of people who are looking for a job. So, we should continue working in that place because of economic reasons even we do not enjoy staying there. Secondly, we need to finish school education. During this period we have lots of lesson to pass. For instance in early education we have plenty of lessons and we are accepted to finish successfully. although we may not like mathematic or science lesson, we have to take these lessons as well. In addition to this we might not choose our teacher during our school time. Teacher may behave badly to us or we may not like the way he teach. Despite all these facts, we should keep up our education even though it is not enjoyable. To sum up, we experience a lot of things during our life. Some of our experiences emerge with our own decisions and preferences, but some of them are not. Either we choose or not, sometimes we should spend our times in not enjoyable environment and should do things that we do not do < a href=" https: //tureng. com/en/turkish-english/willingfully& quot; style=" box-sizing: border-box; outline: none; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); text-decoration-line: underline; font-family: & quot; Segoe UI& quot; , & quot; Lucida Grande& quot; , & quot; DejaVu Sans& quot; , & quot; Helvetica Neue& quot; , Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; white-space: normal; " > willingfully< /a> .
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of our choices may be
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sometimes
we could not decide what to do and I
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do things that they do not enjoy doing such as working with
unfriendly
guys, studying in a school
reluctantly
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, we need to work and earn money to
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people
have a work place which may be unpleasant.
For example
; he has a manager who never thanks to his
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team or
he may have a co-worker who always tends to illustrate a project’s success as if his
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own
success. Needless to say, changing job contains much
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risk
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because
in
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today
’s world finding a job is
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difficult and there are
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of
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people
who are looking for a job.
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, we should continue working in that place
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because
of economic reasons even we do not enjoy staying there.

Secondly
, we need to finish school education. During this period we have
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lots
of
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to pass.
For instance
in early education we have
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of
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we are
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to finish
successfully
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although
we may not like mathematic or science
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, we
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take these
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as well
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In addition
to this we might not choose our teacher during our school time. Teacher may behave
badly
to
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us or
we may not like the way he
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teach
. Despite all these facts, we should
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keep
up our education
even though
it is not enjoyable.

To sum up, we experience a
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of things during our life.
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Some
of our experiences emerge with our
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own
decisions and preferences,
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but
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some
of them are not. Either we choose or not,
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sometimes
we should spend our times in not enjoyable environment and should do things that we do not do
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IELTS essay : People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
380 words
5.5
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