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people should pay the tax. what is your opinion.

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It is argued that people should pay a small portion of their earnings to the nation. This essay agree with the statement because, it is a collective responsibility of all citizen, and they have to spend a certain money in the name of tax to the government. Also, tariff is necessary for the authorities to improve the fundamental development for the society. Firstly, people are responsible to pay taxes to the government. The development of a country not only depend up on various scales of business and other industries but also the contribution of each individual taxes help to boost the development of nation. For example, government can collect a large amount through tariff from each person on their country. This money can utilized by the welfare of the same people through PF and gratuities. Secondly, government can do a lot of developments for the public with the support of taxation. Therefor authorities also have the rights to use a small portion of an individual's money. For example, good transport facilities such as roods and bus stands, better education with the help of advanced public schools, and better medical hospitals are possible with the help of tariff. In conclusion, pay tax to the government is always helping a better development of nation, as well as to the public too. Same time, the authorities also help the people to improve their fundamental facilities. So it is a collective-responsibilities of people to pay taxes.
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people
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pay
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small
portion of their earnings to the nation. This essay
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with the statement
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because
, it is a collective responsibility of all citizen, and they
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have to
spend
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a certain money
in the name of
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tax
to the
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government
.
Also
, tariff is necessary for the authorities to
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improve
the fundamental
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development
for the society.

Firstly
,
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people
are responsible to
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pay
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taxes
to the
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government
. The
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development
of a country not
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only
depend up on various scales of business and other industries
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but
also
the contribution of each individual
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taxes
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help
to boost the
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development
of nation.
For example
,
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government
can collect a large amount through tariff from each person on their country. This money can utilized by the welfare of the same
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people
through PF and gratuities.

Secondly
,
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government
can do
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a lot of
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developments
for the public with the support of taxation. Therefor authorities
also
have the rights to
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use
a
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small
portion of an individual's money.
For example
,
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good
transport facilities such as roods and bus stands, better education with the
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help
of advanced public schools, and better medical hospitals are possible with the
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help
of tariff.

In conclusion
,
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pay
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tax
to the
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government
is always helping a better
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development
of nation,
as well
as to the public too. Same time, the authorities
also
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help
the
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people
to
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improve
their fundamental facilities.
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So
it is a collective-responsibilities of
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people
to
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pay
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taxes
.
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IELTS essay people should pay the tax. what is your opinion.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
242 words
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