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Many people believe that all zoos should be closed, while others claim that zoos have positive impact

Many people believe that all zoos should be closed, while others claim that zoos have positive impact WG8Pq
One of the burning issue of today's world, zoos should be closed however many people think that zoos have not negative effect to environment. majority people think that zoos have negative effect to environment, the reason why wild animals are harmful to youngsters and all ages of people, if the place which animals livid is being destroyed, this wild animals will attach to peoples and majority people came under the harmfullness
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IELTS essay Many people believe that all zoos should be closed, while others claim that zoos have positive impact

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  American English
1 paragraphs
70 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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