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People say that road accident increase day by day . Govts opinion that this is occur for their own faul.everyone should abide by traffic rules give your Opinion

People say that road accident increase day by day. Govts opinion that this is occur for their own faul. everyone should abide by traffic rules give your Opinion KVQ01
A large Number of people died every year by road accident. In this essay Govt say that maxinum dont follow rules so they fall in danger. General people argue with this statement. They think most of the road are not safe. It is a vital issue nowadays, Everyday we saw lots of people died by road accident. Our Transport system is so bad, its very crucial to develop the rules and regulation also raisen public awareness. Common people think this accident happened because transport system is so sillyI think govt help to mitigate this problem by reducing old transport, strick rules raise awareness. Admittedly General people can work to solve this big Problem.
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IELTS essay People say that road accident increase day by day. Govts opinion that this is occur for their own faul. everyone should abide by traffic rules give your Opinion

Essay
  American English
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113 words
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