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people say that a country will benefit greatly if its students study abroad. To what extent do you agree or disagree

people say that a country will benefit greatly if its students study abroad. BlM35
In this day and age, the topic of studying abroad is something which bears some consideration. It is the opinion of this writer that studying abroad will help the country florish though experient and open-minded students. It cannot be denied that going to other countries is the best way to gain experiences. By this, the writer means students who study abroad can achive more academic knowledge than students study in domestic school. Therefore, they make full use of their insights to devote for the country. For instance, there are lots of students used to study abroad came back to Viet Nam for training young generation. In brief, if students have an opportunity tp student in different countries, they can acquire more wisdom to become experts in many fields which help their country flourishing. Another point that needs to be considered is open-minded. It should be considered that an open-minded person is able to learn new things easier, so that they can apply morden techniques or effective methods into the goverment 's policy in their country. It is proven that, in the company, people who used to go abroad for learning usually is easy to adapt new environment. This ability is benefit to both staffs prospection and company development. Consequently, the country in which people willing to adjust innovation will urge to be advanced. Thus, it can be seen that the evolution in the country depend on the quality of young generation. Hence, the goverment and parents must to invest in their education such as sending them to abroad.
In this day and age, the topic of studying
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abroad
is something which bears
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some
consideration. It is the opinion of this writer that studying
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abroad
will
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help
the
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country
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florish
though
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experient
and open-minded
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students
. It cannot
be denied
that going to other
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countries
is the best way to gain experiences. By this, the writer means
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students
who study
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abroad
can
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achive
more academic knowledge than
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students
study in domestic school.
Therefore
, they
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make
full
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use
of their insights to devote for the
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country
.
For instance
, there are lots of
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students
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used
to study
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abroad
came back to
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Viet
Nam for training young generation.
In brief
, if
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students
have an opportunity
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tp
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student
in
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different
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countries
, they can acquire more wisdom to become experts in
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many
fields which
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help
their
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country
flourishing. Another point that needs to
be considered
is open-minded. It should
be considered
that an open-minded person is able to learn new things easier,
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so
that they can apply
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morden
techniques or effective methods into the
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goverment
's policy in their
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country
. It
is proven
that, in the
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company
,
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people
who
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used
to go
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abroad
for learning
usually
is easy to adapt new environment. This ability is benefit to both staffs
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prospection
and
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company
development.
Consequently
, the
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country
in which
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people
willing to adjust innovation will urge to
be advanced
.
Thus
, it can be
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seen
that the evolution in the
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country
depend on the quality of young generation.
Hence
, the
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goverment
and parents
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must to
invest in their education such as sending them to
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abroad
.
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IELTS essay people say that a country will benefit greatly if its students study abroad.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
258 words
5.5
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