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Is it better to play sport inside or outdoors

Is it better to play sport inside or outdoors Rky9p
It is better to do exercise and play sports inside than outdoors for three main reasons. Firstly, do exercise or play sports inside when rainy season, you will not wet. However, if you play sports in rainy season, sometimes you will wet. Secondly, play sports inside is safer than play sports outdoors. If you play inside, you will not hurt too much. For example, If an accident is occured in a gym is better than a ground because it is not as hurt as on the ground. On the other hand, a player who plays a sport outdoors, if an accident is occured, it will be too hurt. Finally, do exercise or play sports inside is get better health, as all of sports that play inside, it make you a good health, while play sports outdoors, sometimes you can be sick, because some days the weather is very bad. To sum up, do exercise and play spots inside are better than outdoors in terms of rainy season, a safer place when accident is occured and the weather changes.
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IELTS essay Is it better to play sport inside or outdoors

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